2. My Observations
Shashikant Tewary My first impression is that the
overall look is very criss-crossed
and confusing because:-
• There are too many lines to
distract attention.
• It is difficult to read the
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information on the label.
My opinion is that the overall
label design is more suited for
fun, funky & products.
However, spa products need to
represent cool, natural and
relaxed feeling.
Difficult to read the information
with the stripes behind it.
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3. My Observations
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Why ‘Body Lotion, wild mango
Why ‘Body Lotion, frangipani
scent’ , ‘Body Mist, polynesian
scent’ and ‘Body Lotion, gardenia
scent’ have the same design ?
scents’ and ‘Body Lotion, vanilla
scents’ have the same design ?
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Overall, I feel that label designs are inconsistent
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and do not help in easy identification
4. Summary & Solution Guidelines
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1.Present label design is cluttered 1.Identify a theme and redesign to
remove clutter
2.Lack of consistency in label design
2.Choose a product, e.g. ‘Body Lotion,
3.Lack of coherent label design
frangipani scent’ and develop a design
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4.Information reading is difficult particularly for it. Each product line up
5.Product positioning is not clear should specific design for easy
identification
6.Not projecting uniqueness of Samoa
3.Have a common link between all label
7.Have you identified target audience? design, for e.g. ‘Malelani’ logo presently
used
4.Information related to product name,
ingredients, mfg. date, etc. should use
legible fonts and contrasting background
for easy readability
5.Position Product as Premium,
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Recreational, Leisure, Eco-friendly, etc.
6.Identify Colour, Tradition, Plant, Food,
Bird, etc., unique to Samoa.
7.Position product on basis of Country,
Age, Gender, etc.
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5. Benchmark Spa Label Designs
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Common link and consistency
• Easy to read information
• Identification of products
• Premium positioning
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Feelings:- Feelings:- Feelings:-
• Thin • Neutral • Bold
• Soft • Pure • Heavy
• Fragile • Tough
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Female design Unisex design
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7. Probable Label Design
• This label design has a central
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theme with wrap around bands
Central theme creates a
common link and focus
Clutter is reduced and
Readability is improved
2 main focus areas of Packaging Design:
Bottle design
Graphic and Label design
• Upmarket Look and feel
Focus on Brand and
Product Name
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Solid Band Ingredients Detail
Instructions
Barcode and Dates
Wave Band
Variations
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8. Design Theme across Product Range
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10. Shift to TOP My Observations
My first impression is that the
overall look is clean and distinct.
However, some minor changes to
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Highlight colour should be more
vibrant to reflect energy. E.g.
orange . But the highlight colour
should not conflict with ‘Le-Spa’
logo.
Shift to TOP
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Making the colours inside the
logo richer by adding little gloss
will make it look premium.
Highlight colour should reflect the
feeling of ‘restore’ and be richer.
But the highlight colour should
not conflict with ‘Le-Spa’ logo.
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Highlight colour should reflect the
feeling of ‘relax’ and be richer. But
the highlight colour should not
conflict with ‘Le-Spa’ logo.
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12. My Suggestions
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From my point of view, 2 logos in
succession are not needed as it is
confusing.
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In the redesigned logo:-
• Flower is shifted to the top
• ‘Le-Spa’ is used only once
• ‘Lelalelei o Samoa’ is placed at
the bottom (please use the
required font).
• Spaces are utilized effectively
• Overall design is more
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balanced.
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Energy
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