This is an example of student drafting a practical write up in science.The first draft was critiqued via a teacher led session the second was done independently. The annotations show where improvements are to be found
9. The use of
highlighting
ensures
Self directed feedback is
student to specific
student critique!
A great sign that
the critiquing Love the
culture is taking could use-
hold signalling
kind
feedback
Again
content
knowledge
Again
kind –
maybe...