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Draft 1Discussionswith teacherwhile studentcritique onean others work
Teacher providedfeedback- identified line of best fit. An   opportunity to        teach
Start of studentcritique on draftone.This wasstructured and ledby the teacherswhile studentsworked in pairs.
Student tostudentcritiquefeedback.Specific about what didn’t link                                  Literacy and           ...
The use of                    highlighting                      ensuresSelf directed       feedback isstudent to          ...
Specific Kind and helpful
Clearer prediction Linkingindependent and dependant variable. No Misconception  about heat in prediction.  More consistent...
Greater level of detail allowing the method to be followed   Idea of monitoring other            factors
Range made clearPrecision of method    considered
Data processed- difference and       patterns calculatedConclusion uses data to describe    pattern, link independentvaria...
Drafting example
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Drafting example

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This is an example of student drafting a practical write up in science.The first draft was critiqued via a teacher led session the second was done independently. The annotations show where improvements are to be found

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Drafting example

  1. 1. Draft 1Discussionswith teacherwhile studentcritique onean others work
  2. 2. Teacher providedfeedback- identified line of best fit. An opportunity to teach
  3. 3. Start of studentcritique on draftone.This wasstructured and ledby the teacherswhile studentsworked in pairs.
  4. 4. Student tostudentcritiquefeedback.Specific about what didn’t link Literacy and thinking connectivesLove the content review Again specific
  5. 5. The use of highlighting ensuresSelf directed feedback isstudent to specificstudent critique!A great sign thatthe critiquing Love theculture is taking could use-hold signalling kind feedback Again content knowledge Again kind – maybe...
  6. 6. Specific Kind and helpful
  7. 7. Clearer prediction Linkingindependent and dependant variable. No Misconception about heat in prediction. More consistent use of appropriate vocabulary
  8. 8. Greater level of detail allowing the method to be followed Idea of monitoring other factors
  9. 9. Range made clearPrecision of method considered
  10. 10. Data processed- difference and patterns calculatedConclusion uses data to describe pattern, link independentvariable and dependent variable

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