8. 問題見本を使い解説
(参考)
https://www.eiken.or.jp/eiken/info/2015/pdf/20151225_pressrelease_1601renewal.pdf
【Full mark Sample Answer 2級・満点解答例】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during the day, so they do
not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet shops do not close at night like regular
shops do, so people can shop for things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the Internet more in the
future. (87語)
9. 4つのパラグラフで構成
2.1 書き方1:パラグラフの構成
【模範解答】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during
the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet
shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for
things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the
Internet more in the future.
合格点を最短・最小の労力で狙う=考えよりこの型を使う
パラグラフ1: まずは「私は~~と考えます」(12語)
パラグラフ2: 理由1「なぜなら~」(46語)
パラグラフ3: 理由 2「それに加えて~」(11語)
パラグラフ4: 結論「2つの理由から、私は~~と考えます」(18語)
10. 【模範解答】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during
the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet
shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for
things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the
Internet more in the future.
パラグラフ1: まずは「私は~~と考えます」(12語)
パラグラフ1のポイント
2.2 書き方2:パラグラフの各要素(イントロ)
パラグラフ1の役割は、「結論の提示」
I think that Internet shopping will become
more popular in the future.
【型のポイント】
(1) 質問に対する自分のスタンス・主張(賛成・反対)を明確に
(2) 2級は80語を超えればいいので、パラグラフ1は、問題文
にある情報を活用し、I think that~のような定型表現で文
章を作成すればOK
11. 【模範解答】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during
the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet
shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for
things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the
Internet more in the future.
パラグラフ2: 理由1「なぜなら~」(46語)
パラグラフ2(理由①)のポイント
2.3 書き方3:パラグラフの各要素(ボディ)
Topic+detailの2文で構成、頭のつなぎ言葉、トピックの明示
First, Internet shopping is very convenient.
Some people are very busy during the day, so they do not
have time to go shopping at regular shops.
Internet shops do not close at night like regular shops
do, so people can shop for things whenever they like.
【型のポイント】
(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる
(2) 1文目(Topic sentence) トピックから選んだも理由を明示(=ネットショッ
プはとっても便利)
(3) 2、3文目(Supporting detail) トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート
※80語の総語数を考えると、パラグラフ2&3で2文ずつが最もバランスが
よい。サポート情報が思い浮かなければ回答例のように片方を充実させる
12. 【模範解答】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during
the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet
shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for
things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the
Internet more in the future.
パラグラフ3: 理由 2「それに加えて~」(11語)
パラグラフ3 (理由②)のポイント
パラグラフ2,3は基本的に全く同じ構成で良い
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying
things in stores.
【型のポイント】※パラグラフ2と同じ
(1) Firstly, secondly等パラグラフの頭に構成を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる
(2) 1文目(Topic sentence) トピックから選んだも理由を明示(=ネットショッ
プは安い)
(3) 2、3文目(Supporting detail) トピックセンテンスを経験や例などでサポート
※80語の総語数、パラグラフ2が3文あったため、パラグラフ3はトピックセ
ンテンス(理由の明示)のみ。準1級以上ではバランスも重要だと考えられ
るが、2級では構成のバランスは大きな減点にはならないと推測
2.3 書き方3:パラグラフの各要素(ボディ)
13. 【模範解答】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future.
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. Some people are very busy during
the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular shops. Internet
shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for
things whenever they like.
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores.
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the
Internet more in the future.
パラグラフ4: 結論「2つの理由から、私は~~と考えます」(18語)
パラグラフ4(結論)のポイント
2.4 書き方4:パラグラフの各要素(結論)
結論を一番最後に再度明示して締めくくる
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start
shopping on the Internet more in the future.
【型のポイント】
(1) 解答例のように結論を示すつなぎ言葉を入れる”So …”
その他の例: It is for these reasons that I believe...
(2) パラグラフ1で述べた、自分の主張(賛成・反対)を再度明確にする
17. 模範解答の文法とレベル
3.2 求められる文法の難易度
関係詞(that)や接続詞(soのみ)でつなぎ1文平均10語
【Full mark Sample Answer 2級・満点解答例】
I think that Internet shopping will become more popular in the future. (12語)
First, Internet shopping is very convenient. (6)
Some people are very busy during the day, so they do not have time to go shopping at regular
shops. (20)
Internet shops do not close at night like regular shops do, so people can shop for things whenever
they like. (20)
Also, Internet shopping is often cheaper than buying things in stores. (11)
People always like buying things cheaply, so they will start shopping on the Internet more in the
future. (18) (total 87語)
太字:エッセイの構成を示すつなぎ言葉等
赤:主な文法(that, whenever;関係詞、so;接続副詞、than;比較級)
文章を接続する場合はほぼsoの繰り返しで可。