Today, let's take a look at body paragraphs and three of the elements that should be within each body paragraph. To write strong body paragraphs, you need to make sure they are structured clearly and organized well.
1. Elements of an Essay
Body Paragraphs
B Y O X F O R D T U T O R I N G
2. Let's take a look at body
paragraphs and three of the
elements that should be within
each body paragraph.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Body Paragraphs
3. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
To write strong body paragraphs, you
need to make sure they are structured
clearly and organized well.
Body Paragraphs
4. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How Many Body
Paragraphs Do I Need?
5. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
For high school papers, you will want to
have 2-3 body paragraphs depending on
the paper requirements and the goal of
your essay.
6. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Does My Body
Paragraph Need to
Include?
11. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Concluding Sentence
12. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Should My Body
Paragraphs Look Like?
13. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Your body paragraphs will change
based on your assignment and goal.
What you do for one body paragraph,
you need to do for the others.
14. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
At minimum, use the
following format:
Topic Sentence. Transition word, detail
sentence. Commentary sentence.
Commentary sentence.
Concluding/transition sentence.
15. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You will probably need to provide
additional detail sentences and
commentary for those detail sentences.
16. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Let's take a look at three of the elements
of body paragraphs in closer details.
17. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Writing Topic Sentences
18. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Your topic sentence tells the reader
what you are going to be discussing
throughout your whole body paragraph.
19. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The body paragraph should not stray
from this topic.
If it does, eliminate this information, or
start a new body paragraph.
20. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How do I Write a Topic
Sentence?
21. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Some easy, yet powerful ways to begin
a paragraph are to use the five W's (who,
what, where, when, why. . .or even how).
22. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Let's say we are writing a paper on
bullying. Here is what your topic
sentences should look like.
23. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHO:
Many children have experienced some
form of bullying.
24. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHAT:
Bullying is harmful and can greatly
affect children negatively.
25. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHEN:
During lunch or after school when
teachers are not around is when bullying
often happens.
26. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHERE:
At schools across the country, bullying
has become a major issue.
27. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHY:
Bullying should be prevented because it
created fear at a place where students
should feel safe.
28. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a HOW:
During lunch or after school when
teachers are not around is when bullying
often happens.
29. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Are There More
Complex Ways to Write
Topic Sentences?
30. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Some more interesting and advances
ways to write topic sentences are:
31. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Number Statements
Bullying is such a major problem that
three quarters of all children have been
bullied or teased.
32. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Where or When = What's
Happening Statements
When we see another student being
bullied at school, we help by defending
the student or telling an adult.
33. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
And, But, So Statements
Bullying bothers everyone, so it should
be discussed with students and
prevented.
34. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Action Verb Statements
My friends and I were playing a game on
the playground when I was first bullied
by an older student.
35. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Alike or Different Statements
There are many different ways to react
when being bullied.
36. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Question and Answer Statements
Why do some kids bully? Often times,
they are looking to receive attention.
37. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Using Transition Words
38. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Why Do I Need to Use
Transition Words?
39. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
First of all, transition words make your
essay clearer. Additionally, they
connect the gaps in ideas. Furthermore,
transition words provide a signal to the
reader about what is coming next.
40. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
See what I did there?
41. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
I used transition words to get my points
across in an organized, easy-to-read
fashion.
42. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Where Do I Put
Transition Words?
43. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Put transition words at the beginning of
your detail sentences. They can also be
place before topic sentences.
44. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Are Some
Examples of Transition
Words?
45. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Check out the following lists of
transitions words:
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51. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Writing Conclusion
Sentences
53. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The conclusion sentence wraps up the
paragraph. This is your chance to leave
the reader with a clear idea of your topic
and the message you want to send.
54. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How Do I Write
Conclusion Sentences?
55. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can SUMMARIZE the
information you wrote about in
your body paragraph.
56. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
There are many ways to prevent bullying from
happening in the future and ways to handle
bullying without getting angry or upset.
57. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can ENCOURAGE the
reader to take action.
58. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
If we go to a teacher counselor, principal or
parent, we can get the help we need to handle
our interactions with bullies.
59. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can try to CONVINCE you
reader once more of your
position.
60. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
We can help stop bullying by trying to avoid
bullies and telling someone we trust.
61. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can CHALLENGE your
reader to think.
62. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Think of how much safer school would be if
we handled bullying in a different manner.
63. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Does My
Conclusion Sentence
Do?
64. O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The closing sentence if your last word
about the body paragraph topic. It is
your clincher.