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Elements of an Essay
Body Paragraphs
B Y O X F O R D T U T O R I N G
Let's take a look at body
paragraphs and three of the
elements that should be within
each body paragraph.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Body Paragraphs
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
To write strong body paragraphs, you
need to make sure they are structured
clearly and organized well.
Body Paragraphs
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How Many Body
Paragraphs Do I Need?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
For high school papers, you will want to
have 2-3 body paragraphs depending on
the paper requirements and the goal of
your essay.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Does My Body
Paragraph Need to
Include?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
A Topic Sentence
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Transition Words
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Details
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Commentary
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Concluding Sentence
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Should My Body
Paragraphs Look Like?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Your body paragraphs will change
based on your assignment and goal.
What you do for one body paragraph,
you need to do for the others.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
At minimum, use the
following format:
Topic Sentence. Transition word, detail
sentence. Commentary sentence.
Commentary sentence.
Concluding/transition sentence.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You will probably need to provide
additional detail sentences and
commentary for those detail sentences.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Let's take a look at three of the elements
of body paragraphs in closer details.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Writing Topic Sentences
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Your topic sentence tells the reader
what you are going to be discussing
throughout your whole body paragraph.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The body paragraph should not stray
from this topic.
If it does, eliminate this information, or
start a new body paragraph.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How do I Write a Topic
Sentence?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Some easy, yet powerful ways to begin
a paragraph are to use the five W's (who,
what, where, when, why. . .or even how).
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Let's say we are writing a paper on
bullying. Here is what your topic
sentences should look like.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHO:
Many children have experienced some
form of bullying.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHAT:
Bullying is harmful and can greatly
affect children negatively.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHEN:
During lunch or after school when
teachers are not around is when bullying
often happens.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHERE:
At schools across the country, bullying
has become a major issue.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a WHY:
Bullying should be prevented because it
created fear at a place where students
should feel safe.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Starting with a HOW:
During lunch or after school when
teachers are not around is when bullying
often happens.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Are There More
Complex Ways to Write
Topic Sentences?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Some more interesting and advances
ways to write topic sentences are:
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Number Statements
Bullying is such a major problem that
three quarters of all children have been
bullied or teased.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Where or When = What's
Happening Statements
When we see another student being
bullied at school, we help by defending
the student or telling an adult.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
And, But, So Statements
Bullying bothers everyone, so it should
be discussed with students and
prevented.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Action Verb Statements
My friends and I were playing a game on
the playground when I was first bullied
by an older student.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Alike or Different Statements
There are many different ways to react
when being bullied.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Question and Answer Statements
Why do some kids bully? Often times,
they are looking to receive attention.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Using Transition Words
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Why Do I Need to Use
Transition Words?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
First of all, transition words make your
essay clearer. Additionally, they
connect the gaps in ideas. Furthermore,
transition words provide a signal to the
reader about what is coming next.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
See what I did there?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
I used transition words to get my points
across in an organized, easy-to-read
fashion.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Where Do I Put
Transition Words?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Put transition words at the beginning of
your detail sentences. They can also be
place before topic sentences.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Are Some
Examples of Transition
Words?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Check out the following lists of
transitions words:
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Writing Conclusion
Sentences
What Do Conclusion
Sentences Do?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The conclusion sentence wraps up the
paragraph. This is your chance to leave
the reader with a clear idea of your topic
and the message you want to send.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
How Do I Write
Conclusion Sentences?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can SUMMARIZE the
information you wrote about in
your body paragraph.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
There are many ways to prevent bullying from
happening in the future and ways to handle
bullying without getting angry or upset.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can ENCOURAGE the
reader to take action.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
If we go to a teacher counselor, principal or
parent, we can get the help we need to handle
our interactions with bullies.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can try to CONVINCE you
reader once more of your
position.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
We can help stop bullying by trying to avoid
bullies and telling someone we trust.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
You can CHALLENGE your
reader to think.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Think of how much safer school would be if
we handled bullying in a different manner.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
What Does My
Conclusion Sentence
Do?
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
The closing sentence if your last word
about the body paragraph topic. It is
your clincher.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
It should:
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Show the importance of your
ideas.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
Encourage the reader to a new
view of the subject.
O X F O R D
T U T O R I N G
End on a positive note.
Thanks for Reading!
Check back next week.
V I S I T O U R B L O G .

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Elements of an essay body paragraphs

  • 1. Elements of an Essay Body Paragraphs B Y O X F O R D T U T O R I N G
  • 2. Let's take a look at body paragraphs and three of the elements that should be within each body paragraph. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Body Paragraphs
  • 3. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G To write strong body paragraphs, you need to make sure they are structured clearly and organized well. Body Paragraphs
  • 4. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G How Many Body Paragraphs Do I Need?
  • 5. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G For high school papers, you will want to have 2-3 body paragraphs depending on the paper requirements and the goal of your essay.
  • 6. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G What Does My Body Paragraph Need to Include?
  • 7. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G A Topic Sentence
  • 8. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Transition Words
  • 9. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Details
  • 10. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Commentary
  • 11. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Concluding Sentence
  • 12. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G What Should My Body Paragraphs Look Like?
  • 13. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Your body paragraphs will change based on your assignment and goal. What you do for one body paragraph, you need to do for the others.
  • 14. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G At minimum, use the following format: Topic Sentence. Transition word, detail sentence. Commentary sentence. Commentary sentence. Concluding/transition sentence.
  • 15. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G You will probably need to provide additional detail sentences and commentary for those detail sentences.
  • 16. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Let's take a look at three of the elements of body paragraphs in closer details.
  • 17. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Writing Topic Sentences
  • 18. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Your topic sentence tells the reader what you are going to be discussing throughout your whole body paragraph.
  • 19. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G The body paragraph should not stray from this topic. If it does, eliminate this information, or start a new body paragraph.
  • 20. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G How do I Write a Topic Sentence?
  • 21. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Some easy, yet powerful ways to begin a paragraph are to use the five W's (who, what, where, when, why. . .or even how).
  • 22. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Let's say we are writing a paper on bullying. Here is what your topic sentences should look like.
  • 23. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a WHO: Many children have experienced some form of bullying.
  • 24. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a WHAT: Bullying is harmful and can greatly affect children negatively.
  • 25. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a WHEN: During lunch or after school when teachers are not around is when bullying often happens.
  • 26. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a WHERE: At schools across the country, bullying has become a major issue.
  • 27. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a WHY: Bullying should be prevented because it created fear at a place where students should feel safe.
  • 28. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Starting with a HOW: During lunch or after school when teachers are not around is when bullying often happens.
  • 29. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Are There More Complex Ways to Write Topic Sentences?
  • 30. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Some more interesting and advances ways to write topic sentences are:
  • 31. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Number Statements Bullying is such a major problem that three quarters of all children have been bullied or teased.
  • 32. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Where or When = What's Happening Statements When we see another student being bullied at school, we help by defending the student or telling an adult.
  • 33. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G And, But, So Statements Bullying bothers everyone, so it should be discussed with students and prevented.
  • 34. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Action Verb Statements My friends and I were playing a game on the playground when I was first bullied by an older student.
  • 35. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Alike or Different Statements There are many different ways to react when being bullied.
  • 36. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Question and Answer Statements Why do some kids bully? Often times, they are looking to receive attention.
  • 37. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Using Transition Words
  • 38. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Why Do I Need to Use Transition Words?
  • 39. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G First of all, transition words make your essay clearer. Additionally, they connect the gaps in ideas. Furthermore, transition words provide a signal to the reader about what is coming next.
  • 40. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G See what I did there?
  • 41. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G I used transition words to get my points across in an organized, easy-to-read fashion.
  • 42. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Where Do I Put Transition Words?
  • 43. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Put transition words at the beginning of your detail sentences. They can also be place before topic sentences.
  • 44. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G What Are Some Examples of Transition Words?
  • 45. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Check out the following lists of transitions words:
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  • 51. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Writing Conclusion Sentences
  • 52. What Do Conclusion Sentences Do? O X F O R D T U T O R I N G
  • 53. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G The conclusion sentence wraps up the paragraph. This is your chance to leave the reader with a clear idea of your topic and the message you want to send.
  • 54. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G How Do I Write Conclusion Sentences?
  • 55. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G You can SUMMARIZE the information you wrote about in your body paragraph.
  • 56. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G There are many ways to prevent bullying from happening in the future and ways to handle bullying without getting angry or upset.
  • 57. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G You can ENCOURAGE the reader to take action.
  • 58. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G If we go to a teacher counselor, principal or parent, we can get the help we need to handle our interactions with bullies.
  • 59. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G You can try to CONVINCE you reader once more of your position.
  • 60. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G We can help stop bullying by trying to avoid bullies and telling someone we trust.
  • 61. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G You can CHALLENGE your reader to think.
  • 62. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Think of how much safer school would be if we handled bullying in a different manner.
  • 63. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G What Does My Conclusion Sentence Do?
  • 64. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G The closing sentence if your last word about the body paragraph topic. It is your clincher.
  • 65. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G It should:
  • 66. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Show the importance of your ideas.
  • 67. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G Encourage the reader to a new view of the subject.
  • 68. O X F O R D T U T O R I N G End on a positive note.
  • 69. Thanks for Reading! Check back next week. V I S I T O U R B L O G .