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The “Write” Time for “Writing Talk” in the Writing Workshop: 
Conferences and Share Time 
Charting the 
Course: 
Discovering 
the Treasures 
of 
Conferences 
in the K-2 
Writing 
Workshop 
A presentation for the 
National Reading Recovery 
& Classroom Literacy Conference 
Kathi Hoover and Carol Lutz 
Kokomo Center Schools 
Kokomo, Indiana 
February, 2010 
Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
The “Write” Time for “Writing Talk” 
in Writing Workshop: 
Conferences and Share Time - 
February, 2010 
Conferencing and sharing are the hidden treasures of Writing 
Workshop. “Writing talk” is the key to unlocking 
the “treasure chest” that honors writers, 
teaches new understandings, differentiates 
instruction, and gathers data to assist 
instructional decisions. 
In this presentation, we will discuss the following points that will help 
unlock the hidden treasures of Writing Workshop: 
1. The “Write” essentials of the Writing Workshop 
2. The “Write” essentials of Conferencing with Writers: what I do, 
what I need, and what I do with the information I gather 
3. The “Write” Essentials of Share Time Conferencing and 
Celebrating with Writers 
4. Things to remember
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The “Write” Essentials of the Writing Workshop 
The ultimate treasure (goal) of Writing Workshop is to teach our 
students to become independent writers. We want them to know that 
writing is “hard fun”. In the primary writing workshop format 
presented below, time is allotted to teach, demonstrate, practice, and 
write independently. 
Format of the Primary Writing Workshop 
Component Time Frame 
Gathering ritual 2 minutes 
Mini-lesson 5-10 minutes 
Begin work period with “Private 
Writing Time” 
5-10 minutes 
Independent work period with teacher 
conferencing or meeting with small 
groups 
K: 5-20 minutes 
1st: 10- 25 minutes 
2nd: 15-40 minutes 
Share Time 10 minutes 
We want our young students to be able to ask questions of 
themselves that improve their writing. Conferencing holds the 
key. 
“The promise of a treasure is not always realized; that 
doesn’t mean we don’t look for new discoveries.” 
~Rebecca Klosowski
The "Write” Essentials of Conferencing with Writers 
Since a conference is simply a conversation, 
why is it so hard? Not only is the 
conversation sometimes difficult, but it is 
also challenging without good classroom 
management. In charting the path to unlock 
the treasures of Writing Workshop with our 
young students, conferencing holds the key. 
What is a writing conference, anyway? 
A writing conference is a meeting in which 
there is conversation between the writer 
and either an adult or a peer. During this 
conversation, the adult or the peer asks 
questions or make comments that teach or 
encourage the writer to interact with his/her own writing. (Calkins, 
1996) Conferences between teachers or peers and young writers help to 
teach and support the writers, focus their writing, and motivate them to 
become independent writers. A writing conference is not a time to work 
on the entire piece of writing but a time to work on one small part of the 
writing. 
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Are there different kinds of conferences that take place between 
teacher and writer? 
There are several different kinds of conferences – some informal and 
some formal, some involving the whole class and some involving one 
student.
Kinds of Conferences 
Roaming conference (“a conference 
on the run” Routman, 2005) 
Quick and meets an immediate 
need 
One on one conference Focused and responds to what the 
child is doing and how he can 
become a better writer 
(Anderson) 
Small group conferences Time spent touching base with 
each student in the group 
(typically with students who have 
similar needs) 
Whole group sharing conferences A public conference celebrating a 
child’s writing to support the 
writer and provide a shared 
learning experience for the rest 
of the class. 
Peer Conferences Students supporting students with 
the kind of help they don’t need 
from the teacher 
What is the purpose of a writing conference? 
Most conferences can be grouped into one of four categories: 
content, procedures, process, and goals. (Calkins) Editing 
conferences might also be held but are more appropriate for 
intermediate grades.
Purpose Focus Questions/ Comments 
Content: the writer 
teaches the listener 
more about the subject 
and then adds 
information to the 
writing 
Clarify the subject 
matter of the writing 
– what the student 
wants to write about 
What do you know about . . . 
. .? 
Encourage problem 
solving 
How could you begin? 
What could you add? 
Encourage 
elaboration 
I didn’t know . . . . Could you 
say that in your writing? 
Ask questions What did you mean when you 
said . . . . ? 
Procedural expectations-teacher 
talks to the 
writer about 
expectations 
Re-teach procedures 
for the writing 
workshop 
I notice that you seem to be 
having some problems with . . 
. 
Process: the writers talk 
to us about what they do 
well, the problems they 
encounter, and how they 
are trying to deal with 
the problems 
Tell the writer what 
you notice about his 
writing. 
I noticed that you . . . . 
What led you to do that? 
Extend the piece of 
writing by teaching a 
new strategy to use. 
How about if you . . . ? 
Encourage problem 
solving 
What problems have you had 
with your writing? 
Reteach skills taught 
during the mini lesson 
Remember when we . . . . 
Give the writer a new 
way of thinking 
You might want to . . . . 
Goals: teacher focuses 
on the writer’s strengths 
and writer sets goals for 
the next writing 
Provide the scaffold 
for a new expectation 
I can see you are ready to 
try . . .
STRUCTURE of conferences (as described by Lucy Calkins, 1994) 
What do I do during a writing workshop conference? 
1. Research 
o Know the writer. Roam the room and observe – be a “kid 
watcher”. Take notes (record keeping is critical!). 
o Attempt to understand what the writer has done - listen to 
the student to better understand his intentions. 
2. Decide 
o After researching, think about the things that we know about 
the writer and the writing. The goal is not to go over the 
entire writing but to isolate one thing in the writing “If she is 
stuck, ask, “What is the problem? If she is finished, ask, “Is 
anything missing?” If she is confused, help to clarify. Decide 
the one component that the student is capable of working on. 
Young writers have many things to work on in their writing. 
Don’t try to fix everything! 
o Decide what the child has done well to compliment, what 
should be taught, and how to go about teaching it. 
o Teach the writer, not the writing. Be sure 
that the item is one that is focused upon the 
child as a writer rather than the writing. 
3. Compliment and Teach 
o Compliment and name the strategy that the 
child used. One option is to compare and 
contrast. 
o Show the writer the place where he used 
the strategy. 
o Pick one teaching point and put in the form 
of a strategy - state what you are going to 
teach. The teaching may be in the form of
demonstration (may use your own unfinished writing), guided 
practice with scaffolding, or showing an example (from 
mentor text, student author, or own writing). 
o Suggest something that the student might try or point out 
some language in the writing that might be clarified. 
o Ask questions that will encourage students to begin revision. 
o Remember to use consistent language. 
o Hold students accountable for what they’ve been taught – 
remind them of the strategy discussed in the last conference 
and ask how it’s going. 
o Lucy Calkins said, “As teachers we need to listen. We need to 
mentor the writer with gasping as if their writing is the best 
thing you’ve ever read.” 
4. Link 
o Rename the strategy that was used or taught, and remind the 
writer to use it again. 
Managing the conference 
“So how do I make this conferencing thing work?” 
1. Managing the Setting 
o A classroom of independent writers achieves because daily 
routines and expectations have been taught, demonstrated, 
practiced, and reinforced. 
o Conferencing cannot take place until young writers can 
manage their own writing time and have built 
stamina for independent work. 
Time spent disciplining will derail conferencing time and 
create frustration for students and teachers.
2. Procedures for Conferencing 
o Move among the children - meet at the writer’s work space. 
o Meet with 4-6 students daily. Assign each student to a day 
of the week so that no students are overlooked (keep 
advanced students scheduled for Mondays and Fridays). 
o Develop a record keeping system: conference folder, 
conference notebook or conference toolkit. 
o Encourage eavesdropping among the other students who are 
nearby. 
o Teach students that when we confer, interruptions are not 
expected. 
o Make conferencing a priority. 
o With more fluent writers, listen to the piece without looking 
at the writing during a first reading. This helps focus upon 
content and craft rather than conventions. 
3. The “TALK” of the conference 
o Limit one on one conferences to 8 minutes in 2nd grade, 4-5 
minutes in 1st grade, and 2-4 minutes in kindergarten. 
o Leave time at the end of the conferences to touch base with 
other students who may need assistance (roaming 
conferences). In kindergarten, quickly check in with each 
child to see what they are working on and what kind of help is 
needed today. 
o The conversation should be focused upon the work the child is 
doing and how to help the child be a more confident and 
independent writer. 
o The conversation should be student centered.
“Write Time” Conference Prompts 
How is your writing going? 
What would you like to share with me today? 
What have you decided to write about? 
What do you notice about . . . ? 
Why did you make that decision as an author? (or illustrator) 
Tell me more about. . . . 
Read the part of your writing that you like best. 
Read your beginning. 
Read your ending. 
I noticed that you . . . Why did you do that? 
What is the best part of your writing so far? 
Have you had any problems with this writing? Show me where 
your problem is. 
What did you mean when you said . . . . ? 
I like the part where . . . Can you tell me more? 
What do you plan to do with this piece of writing when it is 
finished? 
Additional prompts can be found in Writing Essentials, How’s it 
going?, The Art of Teaching Writing. 
PRACTICE THE ART OF LISTENING! 
Now what do I do with the information that I 
have? 
o Keeping notes during your conference is 
important. 
o Thorough notes are needed to plan future 
conferences, observe students’ strengths, Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
plan future mini-lessons, guided writing strategy groups, direct 
share-time instruction, and monitor student progress. 
o “The notes you take during conferences serve as planning and 
assessing tools, so be diligent in completing them with accuracy 
and thoroughness.” (Hoover & Lutz, 2008) 
The “Write” Essentials of Share Time Conferencing and 
Celebrating with Writers – another time for teaching 
What is a share time conference? 
o A share time conference is a public conference. 
o It is a whole group celebration that takes place at the end of 
Writing Workshop. 
o Both the teacher and other students 
celebrate the writer, ask questions 
about the writing for clarification, and 
offer suggestions. 
Are there different kinds of share time 
conferences? 
1. Author’s chair 
o When sharing, students sit in a special 
seat, the Author’s Chair, and read all or 
part of their writing. 
o The teacher may point out a strategy or 
quality of good writing and other writers 
may offer compliments. 
o The writer may ask for feedback, questions, or suggestions from 
other writers. 
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2. Partner share 
o Writers share all or part of their writing with a buddy. 
o Partners may also give suggestions or ask questions for 
clarification. 
3. Small group share 
o Writers share all or part of their writing with a small group, 
possible their table partners. 
o This may or may not include the teacher. 
o Group members may also give suggestions or ask questions for 
clarification. 
4. Teacher led share 
o The teacher may choose to highlight a successful conference 
that will serve to benefit all writers or highlight a specific mini 
lesson strategy that was noticed. 
o She might also point out partners who worked well together or 
address management issues. 
Procedures for sharing - teach children how to share and how to 
listen: 
Sharing Listening 
Look at the audience. Look at the speaker. 
Speak clearly and loudly. Think about what the speaker is 
saying. 
Think about what you are going to 
share. 
Be prepared to respond to the 
speaker. 
“Students learn best if they are part of a community in which all 
members take responsibility for their own learning and also for one 
another’s learning.” (Fountas & Pinnell, Guiding Readers and Writers. p. 88.)
What are some other ways to celebrate writing? 
1. Host a Writer’s Tea 
2. Arrange a time to share writing with another class 
3. Make copies of student writing and give to 
younger students 
4. Participate in a Young Author’s Conference 
5. Publish student writing and add to the classroom 
library 
6. Post writing on the school website to share with the “school 
community” 
Celebrate at the end of each unit of study! 
Remembering the little clues that help unlock the treasures 
• In Kindergarten and early first grade, say “Please read this to me” 
rather than making a guess as to the content of the writing. 
• Publish sparingly. 
• Remember that young students are capable of revising, but most 
editing should come later. 
• Be organized so that time is not wasted between conferences. Use a 
system for recording observations and anecdotal notes. 
• Use only about 30 seconds per child to record observations. 
• Don’t forget to LISTEN! 
Keep this in mind while sailing – 
Writing conferences are more than just the writing “gems”; they are the 
true treasures of the Writing Workshop. 
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Week of: ____________________________________________ 
Writing Workshop – Student Conferencing Notes 
Student Observations
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________ 
Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes 
Name: ______________________ Date: ________
Bibliography 
Anderson, Carl. (2000). how’s it going? Portsmouth, NH.: Heinemann, 
Calkins, Lucy. (1994). The Art of Teaching Writing. Portsmouth, NH: 
Heinemann. 
Calkins, Lucy, Hartman, Amanda, and White, Zoë. (2005). One to One. 
Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann. 
Hoover, Kathi, and Lutz, Carol. (2008). It’s Always the “Write” Time For 
Working Workshop. Monroe, CT: Really Good Stuff Publishing. 
Ray, Katie Wood with Laminack, Lester. (2001). The Writing Workshop. Urbana, 
IL: National Council of Teachers of English. 
Routman, Regie. (2005). Writing Essentials. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann. 
Graphics by Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles www.scrappindoodles.com. 
Sail forth and make it happen. 
Bon Voyage! 
If you have questions, feel free to contact us: 
Kathi Hoover, khoover@kokomo.k12.in.us 
or 
Carol Lutz, clutz@kokomo.k12.in.us

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Buried Treasures

  • 1. The “Write” Time for “Writing Talk” in the Writing Workshop: Conferences and Share Time Charting the Course: Discovering the Treasures of Conferences in the K-2 Writing Workshop A presentation for the National Reading Recovery & Classroom Literacy Conference Kathi Hoover and Carol Lutz Kokomo Center Schools Kokomo, Indiana February, 2010 Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
  • 2. The “Write” Time for “Writing Talk” in Writing Workshop: Conferences and Share Time - February, 2010 Conferencing and sharing are the hidden treasures of Writing Workshop. “Writing talk” is the key to unlocking the “treasure chest” that honors writers, teaches new understandings, differentiates instruction, and gathers data to assist instructional decisions. In this presentation, we will discuss the following points that will help unlock the hidden treasures of Writing Workshop: 1. The “Write” essentials of the Writing Workshop 2. The “Write” essentials of Conferencing with Writers: what I do, what I need, and what I do with the information I gather 3. The “Write” Essentials of Share Time Conferencing and Celebrating with Writers 4. Things to remember
  • 3. Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles The “Write” Essentials of the Writing Workshop The ultimate treasure (goal) of Writing Workshop is to teach our students to become independent writers. We want them to know that writing is “hard fun”. In the primary writing workshop format presented below, time is allotted to teach, demonstrate, practice, and write independently. Format of the Primary Writing Workshop Component Time Frame Gathering ritual 2 minutes Mini-lesson 5-10 minutes Begin work period with “Private Writing Time” 5-10 minutes Independent work period with teacher conferencing or meeting with small groups K: 5-20 minutes 1st: 10- 25 minutes 2nd: 15-40 minutes Share Time 10 minutes We want our young students to be able to ask questions of themselves that improve their writing. Conferencing holds the key. “The promise of a treasure is not always realized; that doesn’t mean we don’t look for new discoveries.” ~Rebecca Klosowski
  • 4. The "Write” Essentials of Conferencing with Writers Since a conference is simply a conversation, why is it so hard? Not only is the conversation sometimes difficult, but it is also challenging without good classroom management. In charting the path to unlock the treasures of Writing Workshop with our young students, conferencing holds the key. What is a writing conference, anyway? A writing conference is a meeting in which there is conversation between the writer and either an adult or a peer. During this conversation, the adult or the peer asks questions or make comments that teach or encourage the writer to interact with his/her own writing. (Calkins, 1996) Conferences between teachers or peers and young writers help to teach and support the writers, focus their writing, and motivate them to become independent writers. A writing conference is not a time to work on the entire piece of writing but a time to work on one small part of the writing. Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles Are there different kinds of conferences that take place between teacher and writer? There are several different kinds of conferences – some informal and some formal, some involving the whole class and some involving one student.
  • 5. Kinds of Conferences Roaming conference (“a conference on the run” Routman, 2005) Quick and meets an immediate need One on one conference Focused and responds to what the child is doing and how he can become a better writer (Anderson) Small group conferences Time spent touching base with each student in the group (typically with students who have similar needs) Whole group sharing conferences A public conference celebrating a child’s writing to support the writer and provide a shared learning experience for the rest of the class. Peer Conferences Students supporting students with the kind of help they don’t need from the teacher What is the purpose of a writing conference? Most conferences can be grouped into one of four categories: content, procedures, process, and goals. (Calkins) Editing conferences might also be held but are more appropriate for intermediate grades.
  • 6. Purpose Focus Questions/ Comments Content: the writer teaches the listener more about the subject and then adds information to the writing Clarify the subject matter of the writing – what the student wants to write about What do you know about . . . . .? Encourage problem solving How could you begin? What could you add? Encourage elaboration I didn’t know . . . . Could you say that in your writing? Ask questions What did you mean when you said . . . . ? Procedural expectations-teacher talks to the writer about expectations Re-teach procedures for the writing workshop I notice that you seem to be having some problems with . . . Process: the writers talk to us about what they do well, the problems they encounter, and how they are trying to deal with the problems Tell the writer what you notice about his writing. I noticed that you . . . . What led you to do that? Extend the piece of writing by teaching a new strategy to use. How about if you . . . ? Encourage problem solving What problems have you had with your writing? Reteach skills taught during the mini lesson Remember when we . . . . Give the writer a new way of thinking You might want to . . . . Goals: teacher focuses on the writer’s strengths and writer sets goals for the next writing Provide the scaffold for a new expectation I can see you are ready to try . . .
  • 7. STRUCTURE of conferences (as described by Lucy Calkins, 1994) What do I do during a writing workshop conference? 1. Research o Know the writer. Roam the room and observe – be a “kid watcher”. Take notes (record keeping is critical!). o Attempt to understand what the writer has done - listen to the student to better understand his intentions. 2. Decide o After researching, think about the things that we know about the writer and the writing. The goal is not to go over the entire writing but to isolate one thing in the writing “If she is stuck, ask, “What is the problem? If she is finished, ask, “Is anything missing?” If she is confused, help to clarify. Decide the one component that the student is capable of working on. Young writers have many things to work on in their writing. Don’t try to fix everything! o Decide what the child has done well to compliment, what should be taught, and how to go about teaching it. o Teach the writer, not the writing. Be sure that the item is one that is focused upon the child as a writer rather than the writing. 3. Compliment and Teach o Compliment and name the strategy that the child used. One option is to compare and contrast. o Show the writer the place where he used the strategy. o Pick one teaching point and put in the form of a strategy - state what you are going to teach. The teaching may be in the form of
  • 8. demonstration (may use your own unfinished writing), guided practice with scaffolding, or showing an example (from mentor text, student author, or own writing). o Suggest something that the student might try or point out some language in the writing that might be clarified. o Ask questions that will encourage students to begin revision. o Remember to use consistent language. o Hold students accountable for what they’ve been taught – remind them of the strategy discussed in the last conference and ask how it’s going. o Lucy Calkins said, “As teachers we need to listen. We need to mentor the writer with gasping as if their writing is the best thing you’ve ever read.” 4. Link o Rename the strategy that was used or taught, and remind the writer to use it again. Managing the conference “So how do I make this conferencing thing work?” 1. Managing the Setting o A classroom of independent writers achieves because daily routines and expectations have been taught, demonstrated, practiced, and reinforced. o Conferencing cannot take place until young writers can manage their own writing time and have built stamina for independent work. Time spent disciplining will derail conferencing time and create frustration for students and teachers.
  • 9. 2. Procedures for Conferencing o Move among the children - meet at the writer’s work space. o Meet with 4-6 students daily. Assign each student to a day of the week so that no students are overlooked (keep advanced students scheduled for Mondays and Fridays). o Develop a record keeping system: conference folder, conference notebook or conference toolkit. o Encourage eavesdropping among the other students who are nearby. o Teach students that when we confer, interruptions are not expected. o Make conferencing a priority. o With more fluent writers, listen to the piece without looking at the writing during a first reading. This helps focus upon content and craft rather than conventions. 3. The “TALK” of the conference o Limit one on one conferences to 8 minutes in 2nd grade, 4-5 minutes in 1st grade, and 2-4 minutes in kindergarten. o Leave time at the end of the conferences to touch base with other students who may need assistance (roaming conferences). In kindergarten, quickly check in with each child to see what they are working on and what kind of help is needed today. o The conversation should be focused upon the work the child is doing and how to help the child be a more confident and independent writer. o The conversation should be student centered.
  • 10. “Write Time” Conference Prompts How is your writing going? What would you like to share with me today? What have you decided to write about? What do you notice about . . . ? Why did you make that decision as an author? (or illustrator) Tell me more about. . . . Read the part of your writing that you like best. Read your beginning. Read your ending. I noticed that you . . . Why did you do that? What is the best part of your writing so far? Have you had any problems with this writing? Show me where your problem is. What did you mean when you said . . . . ? I like the part where . . . Can you tell me more? What do you plan to do with this piece of writing when it is finished? Additional prompts can be found in Writing Essentials, How’s it going?, The Art of Teaching Writing. PRACTICE THE ART OF LISTENING! Now what do I do with the information that I have? o Keeping notes during your conference is important. o Thorough notes are needed to plan future conferences, observe students’ strengths, Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
  • 11. plan future mini-lessons, guided writing strategy groups, direct share-time instruction, and monitor student progress. o “The notes you take during conferences serve as planning and assessing tools, so be diligent in completing them with accuracy and thoroughness.” (Hoover & Lutz, 2008) The “Write” Essentials of Share Time Conferencing and Celebrating with Writers – another time for teaching What is a share time conference? o A share time conference is a public conference. o It is a whole group celebration that takes place at the end of Writing Workshop. o Both the teacher and other students celebrate the writer, ask questions about the writing for clarification, and offer suggestions. Are there different kinds of share time conferences? 1. Author’s chair o When sharing, students sit in a special seat, the Author’s Chair, and read all or part of their writing. o The teacher may point out a strategy or quality of good writing and other writers may offer compliments. o The writer may ask for feedback, questions, or suggestions from other writers. Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
  • 12. 2. Partner share o Writers share all or part of their writing with a buddy. o Partners may also give suggestions or ask questions for clarification. 3. Small group share o Writers share all or part of their writing with a small group, possible their table partners. o This may or may not include the teacher. o Group members may also give suggestions or ask questions for clarification. 4. Teacher led share o The teacher may choose to highlight a successful conference that will serve to benefit all writers or highlight a specific mini lesson strategy that was noticed. o She might also point out partners who worked well together or address management issues. Procedures for sharing - teach children how to share and how to listen: Sharing Listening Look at the audience. Look at the speaker. Speak clearly and loudly. Think about what the speaker is saying. Think about what you are going to share. Be prepared to respond to the speaker. “Students learn best if they are part of a community in which all members take responsibility for their own learning and also for one another’s learning.” (Fountas & Pinnell, Guiding Readers and Writers. p. 88.)
  • 13. What are some other ways to celebrate writing? 1. Host a Writer’s Tea 2. Arrange a time to share writing with another class 3. Make copies of student writing and give to younger students 4. Participate in a Young Author’s Conference 5. Publish student writing and add to the classroom library 6. Post writing on the school website to share with the “school community” Celebrate at the end of each unit of study! Remembering the little clues that help unlock the treasures • In Kindergarten and early first grade, say “Please read this to me” rather than making a guess as to the content of the writing. • Publish sparingly. • Remember that young students are capable of revising, but most editing should come later. • Be organized so that time is not wasted between conferences. Use a system for recording observations and anecdotal notes. • Use only about 30 seconds per child to record observations. • Don’t forget to LISTEN! Keep this in mind while sailing – Writing conferences are more than just the writing “gems”; they are the true treasures of the Writing Workshop. Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles
  • 14. Week of: ____________________________________________ Writing Workshop – Student Conferencing Notes Student Observations
  • 15. Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________ Writing Workshop – Conferencing Notes Name: ______________________ Date: ________
  • 16. Bibliography Anderson, Carl. (2000). how’s it going? Portsmouth, NH.: Heinemann, Calkins, Lucy. (1994). The Art of Teaching Writing. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann. Calkins, Lucy, Hartman, Amanda, and White, Zoë. (2005). One to One. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann. Hoover, Kathi, and Lutz, Carol. (2008). It’s Always the “Write” Time For Working Workshop. Monroe, CT: Really Good Stuff Publishing. Ray, Katie Wood with Laminack, Lester. (2001). The Writing Workshop. Urbana, IL: National Council of Teachers of English. Routman, Regie. (2005). Writing Essentials. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann. Graphics by Graphics ©Scrappin Doodles www.scrappindoodles.com. Sail forth and make it happen. Bon Voyage! If you have questions, feel free to contact us: Kathi Hoover, khoover@kokomo.k12.in.us or Carol Lutz, clutz@kokomo.k12.in.us