The document provides guidance on writing effective LinkedIn ads by analyzing examples of both good and bad LinkedIn ads. It highlights principles of good advertising from advertising legends David Ogilvy and Don Draper. Readers are encouraged to critically examine ads based on 9 questions focusing on headline, image, emotions, interest, and call to action to improve their own ad writing skills. The document includes many examples of LinkedIn desktop and mobile ads to analyze.
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If you have read my ebook on Facebook Ads, then this introduction will look familiar
to you, because the principles of great advertising apply in the same way to Facebook
Ads as they do to LinkedIn Ads. They also apply to Google Ads, just as much as radio
advertising, for that matter.
My hero David Ogilvy, known as the father of modern advertising, wrote extensively
on what makes great ads, and his guidance is still valid today, even if it is largely
ignored, and we draw on his expertise heavily.
My other hero, the fictional Don Draper, said that you should bathe yourself in ads if
you want to be a great ad writer.
This eBook is meant to help marketers become better ad writers by
1. highlighting LinkedIn Ads that work well,
2. highlighting LinkedIn Ads that are terrible, and
3. helping you consider lots of ads at once.
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This approach to teaching ad writing is premised on the belief that repetition breeds
excellence. That is, if you are studying painting, you are better off spending six months
paintings 100 portraits rather than six months trying to make one portrait perfect. We
want you to look through these ads that follow to be able to make quick judgments on
whether the ad is powerful.
And you should do so in the context of the following 9 questions, because as the great
Tony Robbins says, the quality of your results is determined by the quality of your
questions. You should think about the following questions as you are writing your own
ads, and you should start by thinking about these questions in the context of the ads that
follow.
Finally, I want to point out that advertising in the digital arena is an eco-system. You are
always competing for the attention of your audience, and you are not always competing
against your direct competitors. It is critically important to understand that the following
ads were drawn from only two people. This means that approximately 100 ads were in
the LinkedIn Newsfeeds of two people. That is a lot of ads.
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I have tried to group the ads in a sensible way: i.e., ads for the New York Times are
next to ads for the Wall Street Journal, and desktop ads are separated from mobile
ads. But even though the Wall Street Journal is directly competing with the New York
Times, it is also competing with Whirlpool, Dyson, the Commonwealth of Virginia, and
IBM, all of whom are buying ads to reach the same people.
It helps to remember that your ads need to stand out not only against your
competitors, but against all other ads that are reaching the same individual.
What follows are the questions you should consider when looking at the ads. I hope
you find this exercise useful in becoming a more effective marketer.
1. Does the headline grab your attention? David Ogilvy said that when someone sees
your ad, the headline will be read 80% more frequently than the lower body copy,
and we believe that this is still true. If you make your headline more effective, you
are going to have far better results than if you spend time dithering with the less-
read subtext. should.
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2. Does the headline evoke a compelling emotion? Selling is not an entirely
rational thing. If you are simply trying to state the facts, you are unlikely to
stand out.
3. Does the image grab your attention? Since the beginning of advertising,
there has been a war between the art department and the copy department
over which is more important. My own position is that you need to excel
somewhere. You can’t make a great ad if you have mediocre copy and
mediocre art. But you can make a great ad if you are excel only in one of the
two areas. So ask yourself, is the image grabbing your attention?
4. Does the image evoke a compelling emotion? Once your attention is
grabbed, you need to be compelled to do something. We believe that the
image should evoke an emotion of some type, just like the copy.
5. Does the ad hold your interest?
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6. Does the ad appeal to your ego?
7. Does the ad appeal to your sense of greed?
8. Does the ad appeal to your sense of fear?
9. Does compel you to take an action, and is the action clear?
The same ad does not need to hit all of these points. You can have a great ad
that appeals to greed and not fear, for instance. But you can’t have a great ad
that misses all of these points. And now that you know them, I encourage you
to bathe yourself in the ads that follow and see how they measure up.
Don’t forget that even the bad ads were likely approved by more than one
professionally trained marketer, which should give you hope that there is plenty
of room for you to be a leader in this industry.
-Will Marlow