From charlie about Daynas animatic sequence

1. ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK
DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?
The shots make visual sense but when the audio is added
it gets abit confusing. Try to sort the timing out on Premier.
IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX
WILL FIT IN?
When i watched the clip I couldn't see where the VFX
were. I could see one VFX but not many more.
IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?
The dialogue is good and clear and it makes sense to the
viewer. More dialogue is needed for the real sequence.
WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?
0:11s. The shots go black for several seconds. THere
needs to be a shot inbetween to get rid of the black
canvas.
HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?
The sequence needs to be longer and include more
shots.
HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF
THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?
Less camera shake/movement with the 1st few shots.
Some movement background noise.