edited version of my original screenplay.

1. INTRO SEQUENCE
Written By
Dayna Crawford
Based on, if any
Address
Phone Number

2. 1
FADE IN:
1
INT. JOES BEDRROM - MORNING
Jay is asleep in a single, wooden square bed all tucked up,
warm and cosy under his big, thick pattered duvet. Jay was
dreaming of being back home, being reunited with his
step-mum, his pet dog and his friends back in Newport. Joe
is at peace and restful when in bed however, this gets
quickly disturbed by the harsh, sharp noise of his alarm.
JAY'S MUM
Jay, Jay wake up you've got a
letter from Merriweather Academy
JAY
Carries on sleeping.
JAY'S MUM
Jay! Jay! Wake up, This is an
important letter. Wake up and open
it!
JAY
Opens his eyes, stretches out his arms and pulls himself up
out of bed and slowly opens the letter
Mum, guess what? I've been
accepted! Its a long way from here,
I could do with a change of
scenery!
FADE OUT
2: EXT. THE ISLAND - DAY
FADE IN TO JAY'S
ARRIVAL

3. 2
JAY
Jay arrives with his suitcase in hand, quickly dropping it
to the ground with relief on his arrival at the school.
Three students come to meet him.
PENELOPE
Penelope is a short brown haired girl with glasses.
Hi there, my names Penelope. What's
your name? where do you come from?
How long did it take you to get
here? What's your special powers?
SARAH AND EUGENE
Sarah and Eugene are walking with one another. They see
Penelope talking to Jay and start heading towards her.
SARAH
Penelope! What have i told you
about pestering strangers?!
EUGENE
turns around to look at Sarah.
Awwh, give her a break , shes only
curious. She just wants to make
some new friends! don't you Penny?!
Penelope gets embarrassed and her cheeks turn red.
EUGENE
I hope we haven't scared you mate!
So What's your name? What's your
special powers?
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4. 3
1
Can't probably film in college or based around college.
Dayna Crawford Nov 15, 2013 1:35 PM
2
A great start, remember when describing someome make it an action
not include it in dialogue. Otherwise, its going well.
- Hannah
Dayna Crawford Nov 15, 2013 1:43 PM
3
Starts in a bed, we wont be able to film that at collge however, a
very good script.
- Robyn
Dayna Crawford Nov 15, 2013 1:45 PM