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A Process Approach to Feedback in Writing
Li Wai Shing, Joe
Introduction
The recent orientation towards a more learner-centred approach to second
language learning and
teaching leads to a more demanding role for teachers and learners. One of the
most important
changes resulting from this shift is that the teacher is no longer “the dispenser
of knowledge” or “the
distributer of sanction and judgements” (Sheils, 1986). At the same time, this
shift calls for greater
learner participation and responsibility in the learning process. From this
perspective, the teacher
appears to be less „prescriptive‟ in dominating classroom practices and is less
authoritarian, as
learning is now seen to be an individual activity as well as a socially-shared
experience. A new
emphasis on collaborative effort between teachers and learners also assumes a
greater contribution
from the learner in the learning process (Nunan, 1988). The learner is no longer
a passive recipient
but an active participant in the classroom process. In order to fulfill this active
role, learners also
need to develop an awareness of themselves as learners.
At the same time, there has been a major shift in the theory and research of
composing since 1963
(North, 1987). The change is a shift of focus from the product to the process of
writing. The product-
oriented approach considers the writing process as a linear one which can be
determined by the
writer before starting to write (Hairston, 1982). In this orientation, writing is
conceptualized as a
sequential completion of separate tasks (Reid, 1982). The focus of the product
approach in writing
is on a composition made up of a series of parts - words, sentences, paragraphs
- but not on the whole
discourse with meaning and ideas (Sommers, 1982). Thus, the teaching of
writing in the product
approach is a matter of prescribing a set of predetermined tasks or exercises to
the students. The
students are in effect engaged in a task of putting words into grammatical
sentences. To a large
extent, this is not composing but a „grammar exercise‟ in a controlled context.
This approach reflects
the school tradition which emphasizes the “conscious memorization of
grammar rules and the
student‟s explicit knowledge of these rules” (Jones, 1985). Language
proficiency becomes the
primary element that determines the skill of composing, while the importance
of discovering ideas
and creating meaning is overlooked.
With such a restricted view of composing, writing teachers are often distracted
from responding to
student writing, as their time is taken up primarily by identifying and correcting
mechanical errors.
This „police-force concept of usage‟ (Mills, 1953) not only vividly reflects the
traditional belief of
error-free writing dating back to 1874 at Harvard University (Connors, 1985),
but also reflects the
legacy of educational approaches such as, in second language teaching,
audiolingualism which
asserts that teachers have to prevent the occurence of errors at all cost
(Richards and Rodgers, 1986).
Hence, the teacher‟s role in writing becomes limited to that of spotter of
grammatical errors and
reinforcer of a set of grammar rules. However, feedback that is focused on
errors does nothing to
help students in generating and exploring ideas in writing. This kind of
response also pays no
attention to reader-based discourse, let alone to the fundamental characteristics
of the composing
process revealed by research on both Ll and L2 writers (e.g. Emig, 1971;
Flower and Hayes, 1981;
Pianko, 1979; Zamel, 1983).
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Fortunately, the shift of focus from the product to the process of writing has
caused many teachers
to reconsider their practices in ESL writing pedagogy. From the new
perspective, the L2 writer is
seen as an active thinker in the writing process rather than a passive „tabula
rasa‟ to be supplied with
or instructed in prespecified content or grammar rules. Both teachers and
learners are now
collaboratively involved in discovering what written language is and how a
piece of writing is
produced. We no longer believe that writing is am-&directional process of
recording “presorted, pre-
digested” ideas (Taylor, 1981). Instead, writing does not follow a neat order of
planning, organizing
and writing procedures. It is recursive, a “cyclical process during which writers
move back and forth
on a continuum, discovering, analysing, and synthesizing ideas” (Hughey, et
al., 1983). Editing for
grammatical and mechanical accuracy should come in the final stage,
The traditional product-oriented view of writing which regards writing as linear
and fragmented
procedure is thus contrary to the actual writing process (see e.g. Flower and
Hayes, 1981). Writers
are able to make modifications of any sort on the written text or in their
original plans as they review
their writing. The process approach regards writing as a creative and purposeful
activity of reflecting
- both in the sense of mirroring and in the sense of deliberating on (Pennington,
1991) one‟s own
thoughts. The written product, opposite to the product approach, is not seen as
an end itself. Rather,
it is the manifestation of a more effective writer in the making. The student is
seen both as a learner
and as a writer, and the purpose of writing is clear: a written communication
with the writer himself/
herself, with his/her fellow learners, with his/her teacher, and with his/her
intended readers
(Stewart, 1988).
The rise of the process approach marks the beginning of a new era for L2
writing pedagogy. It renders
a new perspective in giving response to students written work and a new way
of providing feedback.
Since the emphasis of writing is now on the whole discourse, the stress of
language is on function
rather than on form, on the use of a language rather than on its usage (Stewart,
1988), where usage
is defined as a body of conventions governing the use of a language. Teachers
no longer act primarily
or only as the authority on writing, but rather as consultants and assistants to
help students to take
over the responsibility as writers. The traditional feedback which concentrates
on the surface-level
mechanics is inadequate in this new orientation. Instead, the teacher must
attend to the various
processes involved in the act of composing, in order to help students produce
coherent, meaningful
and creative discourse. In the process approach, the teacher‟s role has shifted
from an evaluator of
the written product to a facilitator and co-participant in the writing process.
The emergence of a process-oriented approach argues for a completely
different feedback system.
Unlike the product-centred paradigm which regards composing as a product to
be evaluated, the
process-oriented approach considers writing as a complex developmental task.
It pays more
attention to how a discourse is created through the negotiation and discovery of
meaning than to the
production of error-free sentences. Language is a means to explore the writer‟s
ideas. The focus in
the process approach is on how to give “reader-based” feedback (Elbow, 1981),
and the editing of
grammatical accuracy is postponed to the final stage. By offering feedback on
both content and form,
the process approach is more embracing, in that it helps students from the
beginning stage of
generating ideas to the final stage of refining the whole written discourse. The
work of providing
feedback to students will also become more demanding. The teacher has two
roles to play. Teachers
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may, on the one hand, present themselves as helpful facilitators offering
support and guidance; on
the other hand, they may act as an authority imposing critical judgement on
writing products. The
patterns of feedback and responses given by the writing teacher depend very
much on the teacher‟s
conception of the composing process and his/her understanding of learner‟s
errors.
Product-oriented feedback is mainly form-focused, emphasizing grammatical
correctness while
neglecting other aspects such as the discovery and construction of meaning in
the writing process.
Obviously, there is a need to address concerns of accuracy and langauge in the
feedback stage of
writing. Thus, the product approach can usefully be incorporated into the
system of the process
approach.
In this paper, I first consider what feedback is and how an effective feedback
system works in relation
to the writing process. This first consideration is followed by a discussion of
the overall usefulness
of conventional teacher feedback in the form of error-spotting and correction in
enhancing student‟s
writing proficiency. The paper also looks at the negative psychological effects
caused by traditional
practice. Next, the paper explores the concept of feedback as a way of revising
old ideas and
generating new ones, forming an integral part of the writing process. The paper
also discusses why
a more humanistic and learner-friendly feedback system is needed. In this
connection, some
interactive and reader-based techniques are introduced. I conclude the paper by
a discussion of the
practice and problems of process writing in Hong Kong, calling for a
comprehensive theory
integrating a focus on product into the prgcess approach.
Reconsideration of Error Treatment
Many people now understand writing to be a developmental task which can be
conceived as a
performance made up of a series of lesser skills, one built upon another
(Garrison, 1981). The chief
activity in writing is learning to write. By writing, the learner is engaged in a
complex process which
demands the knowledge of content to be written about, the procedural
knowledge that enables the
manipulation of content (e.g. knowledge of syntactic form) and the procedural
knowledge that
enables the production of apiece of writing of a particular type (Hillocks,
1987). It is recognized that
in skill acquisition, there is an important place for feedback. Feedback can be
regarded as a means
of providing information and as a reinforcer for revision. It consists of
comments and information
about performance that someone has demonstrated. The role of feedback as
input in the learning
process is thus crucial to skill acquisition.
Understanding the importance of providing feedback does not necessarily
enable teachers to
provide appropriate feedback. Teachers have to find the right way of providing
feedback for
learners. Johnson (1988) introduces two different situations in which a learner
may get things wrong.
The first one is that the learner simply does not have the appropriate
knowledge, and so the
knowledge or skill the learner possesses is faulty or incomplete. This is what
Corder (1981) calls an
error. The second situation is that a learner lacks processing ability. The
problem here does not
concern whether the learner‟s knowledge is faulty or not; the learner has
difficulty executing the
knowledge he has acquired in operating conditions. The learner could correct
his/her wrong-doing
after careful re-examination, however. The result is what Corder (1981) calls a
mistake.
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The two distinctions address two issues relevant to feedback practices in
writing pedagogy. Bialystok
(1982) argues that the first distinction concerns the learner‟s knowledge of the
formal properties of
the target linguistic codes, while the second highlight the ability to make use of
the formal properties
to express meaning and content. Obviously, during writing, a student needs
these two kinds of
knowledge or feedback to perfect the writing skill: (1) feedback towards a
better mastery of the
formal properties of the target language and (2) feedback to develop procedural
knowledge for
creating and expressing ideas. The former is a „mechanical‟ issue and may
appear in the form of error
correcting, while the latter may be qualitative and presented as advice or
questions to guide the
student to refine ideas and negotiate meaning in the process of composing.
In addition to distinguishing the „mechanical‟ and „qualitative‟ issues, four
additional considerations
must be taken into account if the feedback system is to function adequately.
Johnson (1988) clarifies
these four elements:
a.
a desire or need of the learner to correct the wrong behaviour;
an internal representation of what the correct behaviour looks like (i.e. the
learner‟s own understanding
about the correct behaviour);
C.
the realization of an occurrence of a wrong behaviour; and
d. an opportunity to re-practise the skill as reinforcement.
The first element indicates that, in providing feedback, the teacher has to think
of a better way to
arouse and motivate learners to attend toerrors themselves rather than rely on
the spotting of errors
by an „outsider‟. Johnson (1988) goes on to claim that a teacher‟s initial
guidance should aim to help
the learner from an internal representation of what the correct behaviour is. The
imposition of rules
and standards by an authority may work against the making of an internal
representation, the learner
needs to be made aware of having executed a wrong behaviour so that proper
treatment to eradict
the wrong behaviour can be carried out. However, the best way to provide
feedback and guidance,
according to point (d) above, is not an explanation but an actual retrial of the
expected behaviour
based on the feedback provided by the teacher. One of the advantages of such
re-practice is that “the
most useful feedback comes from those areas of mismatch which students are
themselves able to
identify” and “learn what they will from the comparison” (Johnson, 1988). The
importance of this
feedback system is the emphasis on the use of teacher feedback in providing
input for further re-trial
by the learner.
Moreover, Annet (1969) reminds us that how soon re-trial takes place after
corrective action is more
crucial than how soon the corrective action takes place after the occurence of a
mistake, if the learner
is to take full advantage of it. The implication is clear: the need for a feedback
session after
performance as well as one before re-trial.
The implications of Johnson‟s model for providing feedback in process writing
can be summarized
as follows:
a.
C.
feedback is crucial and necessary to the acquisition and perfection of writing
skills;
feedback should include information on both content and form;
an awareness of error in the part of the learner is essential; yet the arousal of
the learners to attend
to the error him/herself is even more important, and hence,

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d. the external standard or imposition of criteria from an authority in correcting
is not as effective as
providing information for learners to correct their own errors; and
e. correction of wrong behaviour works best when it is done as re-trial in the
real operating conditions.
That is, the teacher should not aim at correction of incorrect sentences but a
redrafting of the previous
work.
These considerations turn our attention to the inadequacey of the „school‟
tradition. The traditional
approach neglects the complex nature and the non-sequential process of
writing, and so the
approach cannot provide input to students in different stages of the writing
process. Very often, the
teacher does not give a second chance for students to revise their work.
Moreover, we should be
cautious about the underlying principles of the product approach. First, the
“accuracy-based”
concept of writing wrongly views the production of a piece of writing as a way
of reinforcing and
consolidating language skills. Student writing is not meant to be perfect. It is a
learning-to-write
practice; the sole purpose of writing is not for marking, grading or testing
(Raimes, 1983). Teachers
need to ask themselves why must there always be a certain external standard
imposed upon our
students without regarding our students as individual writers learning to
become competent? It is
surprising in the traditional paradigm to find that a teacher‟s job in responding
to student writing is
primarily the identifying and penalizing of errors. By responding only to
grammatical errors,
teachers misconceive that writing ability is just an act of becoming more
proficient in the lingusitic
code of the target language, without thinking that feedback on content and
meaning is also essential
to student writers.
a
Even worse, the teacher who works from a product approach often ends the
feedback session
abruptly without providing the feedback to help the student to revise his/her
work. This kind of
feedback session is more like a marking session. Hyland (1990) describes the
problems that “careful
marking should benefit students, [yet] it often seems that it is feedback itself,
rather than students
acting on feedback, which terminates the exercise.” On the other hand, the
traditional way of
marking and correcting student writing makes the learners feel annoyed or even
makes them dislike
writing. Ultimately, the teacher cannot help the learners become competent
writers. Thus, the role
of the teacher is trivialized. The assistance and feedback given by the teacher
should not be confined
to the last stage of the writing process. The marking of products should always
open more
opportunities in which students can redraft their work. By depriving them of
their opportunity for
redrafting and reassessing, the students cannot have the chance of correcting
the wrong behaviour
and re-practising the correct behaviour.
It is therefore no wonder that some authors question the overall usefulness of
teacher feedback
(Fathman and Whalley, 1990). Research evidence confirms that conventional
teacher feedback does
not have a significant effect in enhancing student‟s writing proficiency. Stiff
(1967) claims that both
terminal and marginal correction do not significantly relate to writing quality.
Hendrickson (1978)
finds that providing correct form on student writing has no statistically
significant effect on students‟
writing proficiency. In another study, Hendrickson (1981) shows that the
relation of both directive
and selective corrections to the reduction of error is insignificant. Similarly, no
conclusive results in
terms of writing improvement are found for either long or short written
comments made by teachers
(Hillocks, 1982). Graham (1983) reports that students who received feedback
on every assignment
did not make fewer errors than those students who received feedback on every
three assignments.
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That is to say, more frequent feedback does not ensure more improvement in
writing. Robb et al.
(1988) further confirms that “the more direct methods of feedback do not tend
to produce results
commensurate with the amount of effort required of the instructor to draw the
student‟s attention
to surface errors”. Finally, Greenbaum and Taylor (1982) report that over 30%
of students‟ errors
were categorized incorrectly by their teachers when correcting students‟ work.
Moreover, correction of errors by teachers could be disheartening to the
students and could
reinforce their tendency to focus only on sentence-level problems, neglecting
the discourse as a
whole (Chenoweth, 1987). This could lead to an obsession with the final
product, which is a serious
writing block hindering the awareness of discovering what one wants to say
(Halsted, 1975). Once
the learner is obsessed with grammatical correctness, he/she can hardly
concentrate on generating
ideas and conveying them properly in his/her written discourse. Writing
teachers should not be
surprised to find that ESL writers can only assimilate a small amount of
corrective feedback from
a teacher into their own current grammatical system (Ross, 1982). In addition,
Corder (1981) and
Brumfit (1980) hypothesize that students will retain feedback if they are forced
to approach
correction as a problem solving activity. Moreover, Anson (1989) warns us that
if stuents‟ errors are
often corrected by an external agent, students will never venture to write
without the approval of the
agent and so they can hardly reach the target of becoming proficient writers.
To conclude, the failure and the negative psychological effects caused by the
traditional product
approach are largely caused by a misunderstanding of the nature of composing
and the misapplication
of some traditional educational orientations (such as behaviouristic views of
learning) by writing
teachers. In addition, not many teachers have knowledge of how an effective
feedback system works.
This is understandable considering that a new era of research on theroy and
practice of writing
pedagogy began only 30 years ago (North, 1987) and that the process approach
is still not widely
practised in writing classrooms. Moreover, the process approach does not really
exclude the
correction of errors: Editing and revision are processes vital to the process
approach. The process
approach in no way excludes editing and revision, but rather calls for a
different management of the
correction of errors and of the provision of feedback. It is to the discussion of
this management
function that we now turn to.
Feedback as Revising and Rewriting
In order for the student to learn from the writing process, a more interactive
and student-centred
approach in giving feedback to students is required. One guiding principle
proposed by Kehl (l970)
suggests that teachers communicate “in a distinctly human voice, with sincere
respect for the writer
as a person and sincere interest in his improvement”. To put this orientation
into practice, writing
teachers need to help students to build a sense of awareness in themselves as
writers, a sense of
confidence and self-worth, to counteract the negative influcence of the
traditional approach. Praise
and positive reinforcement could be incorporated into our teaching strategies to
promote a better
teacher-student relationship. (Daiker, 1989). This means the teaching of writing
could be more
humanistic. Diederich (1963) says the use of prasing whatever a student does
well improve writing
more than any kind or amount of correction of what he does badly, and that it is
especially important
for the less able writers who need all the encouragement they can get. In other
words, the teacher
should start from “where the student is, not where the teacher wishes the
student was” (Murray,
1982).
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In the process orientation, teachers are not authorities but facilitators; they are
not judges or mere
proofreaders but genuinely interested readers of original texts created by
students (Zamel, 1985).
It will also be necessary in the process approach for students to learn to be their
own critic reader
capable of revising their own prose without relying too much extensive input
from the outsider. The
change of. writing from „writer-based prose‟ to „reader-based prose‟ is not easy
for learners. Writers
need to pay attention to writing as communication of meaning and treat writing
as goal-oriented
activity. The teacher is perhaps the best audience (Lacy, 1989) of the students
and should work as
reader-and-editor. Students need to discuss, to expand and to „re-see‟ what has
been written down
with the teacher. The teacher‟s role is active throughout the writing process.
Teachers have to cater
to a wide range of activities to explore learner‟s strategies for better discourse
and redrafting
(Brumfit, 1979). This student-centred process-focused approach tries to
accommodate individual
differences among students while enabling every learner to become actively
involved in the process
of producing meaningful as well as „correctly‟ written discourse.
Before re-defining the concept of feedback for process writing, let us review
the four basic
assumptions about giving information towards revision:
a.
b.
C.
d.
FEEDBACK IS RECURRENT
Feedback and responses must be incorporated within the writing process as
recursive and cycling
events.
FEEDBACK IS INPUT FOR REVISION
Feedback and responses shall always be given as a kind of input for further
revision and redrafting.
FEEDBACK IS NOT GRADING
Feedback and responses to a writer‟s efforts should not be postponed until the
last stage of the writing
process. Providing feedback must be distinguished from grading or marking.
FEEDBACK IS GIVEN AS APPROPRIATE
Different kinds of feedback and responses (e.g. content-focused and form-
focused) must be given to
the writer at different points in the writing process as appropriate.
Taking all this into consideration, the concept of feedback can be reformulated
as follows:
Feedback is an inseparable and recursive component of both the teacher‟s instruction and
the writing
process. It contributes input throughout the writingprocess as a means of tapping the
unexplored resources
from the writer. It represents a sense of audience and purpose informing the on-going
writingprocess, while
establishing a concept of collaborative reader-editor relationship between teacher and
student. The
feedback from the reader-editor appears as input for further reexamination and revision of
the prior written
work by providing optimum op-portunities to develop and refine ideas, and may take
various forms such
as conference and interview. It also helps the writer to achieve and acquire a sense of
confidence, a sense
of voice and a sense of power in language while gaining access to competent writers or to
other writers, whose
experience and competence may be similar to or different from that of the author.
Feedback Techniques
If revision is central to the process of writing, and considering that pre-writing,
writing and rewriting
are likely to be going on simultaneously (Smith, 1982), more attention needs to
be paid to exploring
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effective techniques of teacher-responses. In what follows, five feedback
methods are introduced.
They are not meant to be definitive - further development and refinement are
needed - but they have
been tried out by practising teachers or researchers. These techniques reflect
the rationale of the
feedback model described in this paper and have been proved to work
profitably with process
writing.
(A) Student Self-Monitoring Technique
The basic assumption of the student self-monitoring technique is that teacher
and student should
meet on a one-to-one basis as editor and writer to discuss the draft text. This
one-to-one conference
is the best situation for providing feedback since both parties can work together
to solve the
problems that arise. Unfortunately, the teacher may find it difficult to afford or
arrange the time for
an individual conference. To alleviate the difficulty, Charles (1990) suggests
that students can
anotate their drafts with comments and questions for the teacher‟s responses.
The teacher responds,
in return, by writing to these notes with direct and appropriate feedback. This
technique not only
facilitates the teacher‟s understanding of the writer‟s problems, but also allows
students to play a
more active role in gaining access to teacher feedback. Charles (1990)
describes her techniques as
a 4-phase activity:
Step 1:
Step 2:
Step 3:
Step 4:
Students draft and „monitor‟ their texts
Students write the first draft, underline and anotate the problem areas for
teacher response.
a
Teacher/editor responds in writing to the monitored comments
Teacher responds to the first draft and replies the written queries. He also adds
further comments
and returns the paper.
Students respond to editorial comments and rewrite their drafts
Students produce a second draft and add further explanations or questions to
the teacher‟s
comments. First and second drafts are then handed in.
Teacher/editor responds to student comment and second drafts
The teacher again notes down on the first draft any further explanations that are
necessary. Teacher
responds to the second draft checking whether the student is able to deal with
the problems
identified during the self-monitoring phase. Further revisions can go on
depending on the students,
the nature of paper and the time available. If not, the second draft may be the
final revision.
The merits of the student-centred self-monitoring technique is that it
encourages students to look
critically and analytically at their writing. Moreover, the teacher can give
tailor-made feedback to
individual students.
(B) Providing Interactive Feedback
Marking can be a tedious classroom chore. Teacher correction seldom brings
improvement in
subsequent writing since teacher correction is often regarded - by both teacher
and student - as an
ending of the writing process. By reducing the negative effects of marking
errors without reducing
the benefits of the teacher‟s diligent efforts, Hyland (1990) Suggests „minimal
marking‟ and taped
commentary to make feedback more productive and interactive. The means to
„minimal marking‟
is by using correction codes. This leaves a space for active correction by the
student rather than
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reading the disheartening correction of the teacher written in red. By decoding
the correction
symbols, students have the opportunity to identify the mistakes and correct
them for reassessment
by the teacher.
If teacher needs to give more detail (which is always the case) and sophisticated
comments in areas
other than mechanical errors, the technique of recorded commentary is useful.
Instead of writing
tedious comments, the teacher can just read through the paper and talk about
the weaknesses and
merits, recording them on a tape recorder. Hyland (1990) claims that this
method is more effective
since the writer “can see how someone actually responds to [his/her] writing as
it develops”.
However, Hyland reminds us that it is not possible to include all the mistakes
in terms of „codes‟, and
too many codes could be confusing. Also, codes do not represent all kinds of
feedback (other than
on mistakes).
(C) Peer Feedback
Peer feedback may be referred to by many terms such as peer evaluation, peer
critiquing, peer
editing or peer response (Keh, 1989). Yet all of these names refer to the same
kind of activity:
Students read their peers‟ papers and make responses to them as a reader. This
gives writing an
authentic purpose rather than being only an assignment to be graded, and, in
turn, develop a sense
of a divergent audience, thereby motivating students to communicate better
„stories‟ (Urzua, 1987).
Students presumably react more willingly and actively to the questions and
feedback made by their
trusted friends. They can all feel the joy of sharing their comments and their
writing within the group
(Lacy, 1989). At the same time, they become a better critic of themselves, for
they become more
aware of their own writing as they are reading another‟s writing. Students
therefore learn more and
become more confident as well. However, Urzua (1987) reminds us of how
crucial is the question
of training learners to cope with the task. Students may not be able to ask
constructive questions for
redrafting. Surely, students must be trained or guided to perform the task - for
example, to be critical
of the development of ideas and organization in written discourse.
(D) Conferencing
Carnicelli (1980) makes it clear that although conferencing can take various
forms, all conferencing
has one common feature: It is a conversation between 2 parties, that is, between
a teacher and a
student. It is the conversation that yields the merits and strengths of the
conference method.
Conferencing is designed to help students find their own way in writing.
Carnicelli lists six major
teacher activities when a conference method is adopted:
1. the teacher should read the paper carefully;
2. the teacher should offer encouragement;
3. the teacher should ask the right questions;
4. the teacher should evaluate the paper;
5. the teacher should make specific suggestions for revising the paper;
6. the teacher must listen to the student.
He also summarizes five major advantages of the conference method:
1. Individualized instruction in writing is more effective than group instruction.

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2. The teacher can make a more effective response to the paper in an oral conference than
in written
comments.
3. The student can learn more from an oral response than from written comments.
4. Conferences can promote self-learning.
5. The conference method is the most efficient use of the teacher‟s time.
(E) Correcting Spaghetti Writing
The teacher may often find that many students can communicate ideas and
meaning, but they often
write loose-jointed sentenceswithout meetingthe standards of grarnrnatical
accuracy and coherence.
This kind of writing in terms of incoherent sentences is referred to as spaghetti writing by
McDevitt
(1989). To help students learn to be responsible for their own mistakes, students need to
be trained
to solve the problem of sentence-level incoherence. First of all, students must be
taught what a
sentence is. Basically, the process of correcting spaghetti writing can be
dividied into 2 phases:
I.
Pre-writing Exercise
(i) Recognition of „basic sentence‟
The teacher gives some complex sentences to students and asks them to divide each
sentence into
meaningful word groups. Students are then asked to underline the basic sentence which
can stand
as a complete and meaningful statement.
(ii) Expansion exercise
The teacher asks students to expand a number of basic sentences by responding to
specific guided
WI-I-questions. The teacher may also highlight a particular word to be expanded. For
example:
T: The policeman stopped the car. (When? Why?)
S: The policeman, thinking that the driver was drunk, stopped the car at once.
(iii) Linking devices
This is an exercise to reinforce students‟ skill in manipulating conjunctions. Students fill
in the
blanks in short texts, such as:
although . . . . . . . . .
Smoking is dangerous for your health so . . . . . . . . . .
because . . . . . . . . . .
II. Post-writing Analysis
First, the teacher presents a completed paragraph of ungrammatical English to see
whether student
can locate and correct errors. If necessary, the teacher can underline the mistakes for
students. Then
students are asked to examine each of the previously marked sentences and divide them
into
meaningful word groups. If students find any sentence with no basic sentence or with too
many basic
sentences, students have to rewrite paragraph, keeping the original ideas of the writer.
This exercise is not easy to conduct, and some of the grammatical points are
not easy to explain to
students (Kharma, 1986). However, the activity “enables student writers to
review their writing in
a more critical and systematic manner” (McDevitt, 1989). By using the
technique of correcting
spaghetti writing, the teacher can help students to become better editor-reader
of their own writing
and at the same time setting themselves free from concentrating on correcting
mechanical errors.
The insights of McDevitt could perhaps be extended to the development of
techniques for working
on high-level, i.e. discourse-level, intersentential coherence.
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Implications for The Teaching of Writing in Hong Kong
Most instruction in teaching writing in Hong Kong follows the traditional
model described by
Applebee (1981), consisting of exercises and drills with little opportunity for
students to explore the
act of expressing their thoughts. The orientation towards grammatical
correctness is not difficult to
understand since many teachers believe that the most serious problems of ESL
writers is their
incorrect English usage. These Hong Kong teachers think that L2 learners need
more practice in
sentence-level skills and that organization and other strategies ofwriting can be
taught later (English
Bulletin Editors, 1962). However, sentence-level mechanics and strategies for
discourse-level
coherence cannot be separated. Both of them are essential elements for
composing and must be
learnt and taught at the same time in the writing lessons. If the strategies for
discourse-level
coherence are not taught in school, the chance of students acquiring these skills
in the future is rare
and will probably be postponed indefinitely.
The problem is that many Hong Kong teachers still stick to the principles of
audio-lingual approach
that (1) writing should be the last of the four skills to be acquired (Ortmeyer,
1981) and (2) that
teachers should prevent occurrence of written errors at all cost. Though the
latest ESL writing
principles advocated by the Hong Kong Education Department is based on the
communicative
approach (Hong Kong Curriculum Development Committee, 1983), it is likely
that local teachers
still react to a text as discrete items presented in linear sequence. They still
approach students‟ texts
as final products to be evaluated upon some preconceive notions about good
writing. They believe
that the teaching of form should precedegontent (Li, 1990). One of the reasons
is that many Hong
Kong teachers do not receive training in process writing. Moreover, Hong
Kong teachers have to
teach grammar rules and English usage to meet the requirement of the Hong
Kong Certificate of
Examination (Mohan and Lo, 1985). Writing, then, is likely to be misconceived
by both the teachers
and students as a means to practise and consolidate grammar rules and usage.
Hence, in reality, the
teaching of writing is reduced to a set of prescriptive procedures which need to
be strictly adhered.
On the other hand, many ESL teachers do not think that the process approach is
applicable for
students (Ammon, 1985). This is particularly true in Hong Kong since teachers
are not familiar with
the techniques involved in process writing. Mohan and Lo (1985) also claim
that the process-
oriented approach is difficult to implement in terms of students‟ familiarity
with the methods used,
the large class size, and the pressure from standardized examinations. In
addition, it is quite difficult
for many teachers to give up the controlling and „grammarian‟ role in the
classroom. Even if they are
willing to practise process writing, they may find themselves lacking the proper
training and school
resources for implementing that practice.
To change the situation, teachers must start to reconsider their role in the
language classroom. They
need to consider the value of being no longer judges but facilitators in the
language classroom. Thus,
in responding to student writing, they should not be too obsessed about
students‟ grammatical
accuracy, ignoring their responsibility of taking care of various aspects of the
students‟ writing
process. Teachers also have to accept individual differences among students. In
this respect, more
time needs to be spent on giving reader-editor feedback to student writing
rather than on correcting
surface-level errors. Generally speaking, teachers have to pay more attention to
the writing process
- to how they can help students generate ideas, negotiate meaning and revise
their drafts etc.
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Obviously, more communication and interaction between teacher and students
during the writing
process is essential.
Apart from the change in classroom procedures and practices, innovations have
to be introduced in
the training of ESL teachers. First, ESLw-riting teachers must be given the
opportunity to learnwhat
process writing is and to be trained or re-trained in process writing skills. That
is to say local institutes
such as the Institute of Language in Education, the Colleges of Education and
the Schools of
Education at Hong Kong University and Chinese University have to provide
ESLwriting courses for
both practising and pre-service teachers. At the same time, the HK ESL writing
syllabus has to he
revised so as to accommodate the new practices.
In addition, new textbooks have to be written to meet the needs of process
writing in schools.
Students also need guidance in how to play an active role in the language
classroom. Moreover, the
school authority should change some of their traditional practices concerning
the teaching of writing,
such as asking the students to write a certain number of compositions for each
academic year,
without paying any attention to enhancing the standard of grammatical
correctness and the content
of student writing. Instead, the aim of teaching writing should focus on how to
help students acquire
the skills of writing. To achieve these objectives, more guidance and resources
must be offered to
ESL writing teachers and more support have to be given for carrying out Hong
Kong-based research
on teaching process writing in order to develop better practices for the local
situation.
Conclusion
The act of writing is never easy to define. Arndt (1987) says that writing can
have two different
meanings depending on how we use the term. What do we really want to talk
about when we say we
are writing‟? Are we referring to the product of composition - text; or are we
referring to the act of
composing itself? This question gives rise to the two major paradigms of
writing pedagogy: the
product-focused approach and the process-oriented approach. The former
approach focuses on the
end product of the writing process, with its major emphasis of surface-level
mechancis. The latter
concentrates on how a product is produced, with its major concern on content
and discourse as a
whole. The product approach is often criticised for the fact that it does not take
into account the
psychological and cognitive processes intrinsic to writing. The opponents of
the product-approach
claim that process-writing seems to be the best way to teach writing (Wason,
1981).
What both parties to the debate have neglected is the fact that the two
approaches represent two
different perspectives for looking at writing. There is simply no one best way to
understand and to
teach so complex a skill as writing. We can only say that the process approach
enables people “to see
writing in a new way and thereby ask questions that were not asked as long as
people saw writing
simply as finished product” (Liebman-Kleine, 1986), while the product
approach reminds us that
grammar and syntax are also important features of writing which cannot be
eliminated for writing
proficiency. We should not treat the two approaches as two polarising dogmas
of two extreme beliefs.
They are, in fact, two sides of the same coin.
Moreover, the two paradigms cannot be divorced from each other since
composing is a language
problem as well as a rhetorical problem. Only by combining the two
approaches can the aim of
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teachingwriting be achieved: to “free [our students] from the pressure of having
to produce accurate,
standard English at the same time as they are generating and exploring ideas in
writing” (Stewart,
1988). There is always a need to integrate the two views into one unified theory
in which student
writers and teacher-readers can explore meaningful discourse together. We
need not see writing as
a tool to demonstrate learning any more, but rather as a tool for further learning
(Emig, 1977).
Thus, the two approaches can acquire new meanings and have new roles „to
play. The process
approach can be seen as formative feedback for refining writing. In this respect,
the teacher‟s focus
is on monitoring student progress during instruction. The purpose of formative
feedback is to
provide continuous feedback to both the students and teacher on learning
successes and failures of
an on-going activity. Such feedback provides a chance for the teacher to
interact with the students
and to modify his/her instruction methods or materials to facilitate better
learning. This kind of
feedback also requires the teacher to gather fairly detailed information on the
progress of the
student in a period of time and to intervene at any possible moment of the
learning process to help
the learner. In this process, the teacher is not a distant judge but a mentor to
facilitate learning. A
better teacher-student relationship can thus be established.
In contrast, the product approach needs no longer be regarded as primarily a
marking orientation
in the classroom. Rather, it can be interpreted as a way of providing summative
feedback to students.
By providing summative feedback to students, the teacher tries to determine the
student‟s status of
achievement at the end of an instructional segment with the primary goal of
certifying student
mastery of the intended learning outcomes, and to determine the extent to
which the instructional
objectives have been achieved. In this way, the information gathered for
summative purpose may be
useful in a formative sense since the teacher knows how effective his/her
instruction is and how far
further reinforcement is needed for his/her students. With such information, the
teacher can revise
his/her teacher strategies in the subsequent lessons. In this way, summative and
formative feedback
become necessary and inseparable components of ESL writing instruction and
are complementary
to one another. Finally, the two kinds of feedback[l], if adopted into the writing
classroom, can be
genuinely incorporated as a unified pedagogical ESL writing feedback system,
embracing the
advantages of the two kinds of writing approaches. However, before we can
reach that goal, first we
need to “examine the [present] classroom authority structure and perhaps even
redefine the purpose
for the composition class (Onore, 1989).
The goal of combining process and product orientation will have profound
effects on writing-
revision practices in the composition classroom. One of the most important
consequences is the
collaborative effort between teacher and students in making writing a joint
contribution of both
parties. In this orientation, both parties will be considered active participants in
sharing ideas,
making suggestions and doing revision in the process of composing. Student
writers are given total
freedom in controlling their own prose in making choices and in giving
solutions to rhetorical
problems. The teacher‟s response to student writing becomes a real
communication from a reader
and not from an instructor identifying and correcting mistakes. Comments from
the teacher are
reassurring to the students and the focus of comments are meaning-centred,
which urges the students
to think of themselves less as students and more as writers (Sommers, 1989).
Errors are now treated
not as something to be penalized but as a necessary by-product of language use.
In this way,

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everything said and written in the comments encourages the student writer to
take over the
responsibility of writing himself/herself or assists the student to express his/her
ideas and meaning
in the written discourse. A friendly relationship is established between teacher
and students. Thus,
the psychology of positive reinforcement can be applied in the writing
instruction and become an
essential resource for teaching writing. There is no fear of whether the student
is able to cope
psychologically with the large amount of red markings or negative comments
or the fear of an
external agent prescribing every detail for the learner in the writing lesson. In
this way, a better
teacher-pupil relationships will be enhanced and the two parties can gain a
deepened appreciation
of writing and greater satisfaction with their work. As a result, the teaching of
writing can become
more humanistic and less authoritarian. Moreover, the unified pedagogical ESL
writing should be
facilitated and how marking and editing should be implemented. It also gives
an answer to the
question of „curing‟ grammatical mistakes and the creation of a reader-based
written discourse in
one thoery.
However, many teachers would think that it is not easy to implement such
practice in Hong Kong:
Would it be too demanding for Hong Kong teachers to realize these goals,
knowing that they have
a heavy teaching duty and a large number of students to attend to? At first
glance, the question seems
valid. What really matters, however, is a change of attitude and an obligation to
follow the new
practice. Such a change of attitude and a sense of commitment can be
engendered only by taking
away the teacher‟s mask of „authoritarian‟ in the classroom and by
reconsidering his/her own role
in the composition classroom. In the light of the humanistic orientation,
teachers are better regarded
themselves as facilitators and should treat their students as learners and writers
in their own right
and not as subjects to be moulded according to the teacher‟s own disposition.
Secondly, with the
practice of the new feedback system, much time is saved from correcting
grammatical mistakes. The
time saved can be used more profitably in writing constructive comments for
students. By interacting
with the students, a more learner-friendly atmosphere can be created. In this
way, the ESL writing
classroom becomes a place not for discouraging student writers, but rather a
reassurring milieu for
nurturing competent and confident learner writers. Thus, both the teaching and
the learning of ESL
writing skills can be improved, to the benefit of the students as well as teachers.
Note
1. The notion of feedback adopted by the author is adapted from Striven‟s
(1967) discussion of
summative and formative evaluation.
Acknowledgements
I am grateful-to Ms. Valerie Amdt, who first introduced me with plentiful and
pleasant ideas about
process writing. Most of all, I am grateful to Dr. Pennington for her unfailing
assistance and input
in helping me to draft the paper, and her efforts and ideas in making the text
more readable.
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A classroom experiment in student oriented design and textbook

  • 1. This is the html version of the file http://sunzi.lib.hku.hk/hkjo/view/10/1000038.pdf. Google automatically generates html versions of documents as we crawl the web. Page 1 A Process Approach to Feedback in Writing Li Wai Shing, Joe Introduction The recent orientation towards a more learner-centred approach to second language learning and teaching leads to a more demanding role for teachers and learners. One of the most important changes resulting from this shift is that the teacher is no longer “the dispenser of knowledge” or “the distributer of sanction and judgements” (Sheils, 1986). At the same time, this shift calls for greater learner participation and responsibility in the learning process. From this perspective, the teacher appears to be less „prescriptive‟ in dominating classroom practices and is less authoritarian, as learning is now seen to be an individual activity as well as a socially-shared experience. A new emphasis on collaborative effort between teachers and learners also assumes a greater contribution from the learner in the learning process (Nunan, 1988). The learner is no longer a passive recipient but an active participant in the classroom process. In order to fulfill this active role, learners also need to develop an awareness of themselves as learners. At the same time, there has been a major shift in the theory and research of composing since 1963 (North, 1987). The change is a shift of focus from the product to the process of writing. The product- oriented approach considers the writing process as a linear one which can be determined by the writer before starting to write (Hairston, 1982). In this orientation, writing is conceptualized as a sequential completion of separate tasks (Reid, 1982). The focus of the product approach in writing is on a composition made up of a series of parts - words, sentences, paragraphs - but not on the whole discourse with meaning and ideas (Sommers, 1982). Thus, the teaching of writing in the product approach is a matter of prescribing a set of predetermined tasks or exercises to the students. The students are in effect engaged in a task of putting words into grammatical sentences. To a large
  • 2. extent, this is not composing but a „grammar exercise‟ in a controlled context. This approach reflects the school tradition which emphasizes the “conscious memorization of grammar rules and the student‟s explicit knowledge of these rules” (Jones, 1985). Language proficiency becomes the primary element that determines the skill of composing, while the importance of discovering ideas and creating meaning is overlooked. With such a restricted view of composing, writing teachers are often distracted from responding to student writing, as their time is taken up primarily by identifying and correcting mechanical errors. This „police-force concept of usage‟ (Mills, 1953) not only vividly reflects the traditional belief of error-free writing dating back to 1874 at Harvard University (Connors, 1985), but also reflects the legacy of educational approaches such as, in second language teaching, audiolingualism which asserts that teachers have to prevent the occurence of errors at all cost (Richards and Rodgers, 1986). Hence, the teacher‟s role in writing becomes limited to that of spotter of grammatical errors and reinforcer of a set of grammar rules. However, feedback that is focused on errors does nothing to help students in generating and exploring ideas in writing. This kind of response also pays no attention to reader-based discourse, let alone to the fundamental characteristics of the composing process revealed by research on both Ll and L2 writers (e.g. Emig, 1971; Flower and Hayes, 1981; Pianko, 1979; Zamel, 1983). 47 Page 2 Fortunately, the shift of focus from the product to the process of writing has caused many teachers to reconsider their practices in ESL writing pedagogy. From the new perspective, the L2 writer is seen as an active thinker in the writing process rather than a passive „tabula rasa‟ to be supplied with or instructed in prespecified content or grammar rules. Both teachers and learners are now collaboratively involved in discovering what written language is and how a piece of writing is
  • 3. produced. We no longer believe that writing is am-&directional process of recording “presorted, pre- digested” ideas (Taylor, 1981). Instead, writing does not follow a neat order of planning, organizing and writing procedures. It is recursive, a “cyclical process during which writers move back and forth on a continuum, discovering, analysing, and synthesizing ideas” (Hughey, et al., 1983). Editing for grammatical and mechanical accuracy should come in the final stage, The traditional product-oriented view of writing which regards writing as linear and fragmented procedure is thus contrary to the actual writing process (see e.g. Flower and Hayes, 1981). Writers are able to make modifications of any sort on the written text or in their original plans as they review their writing. The process approach regards writing as a creative and purposeful activity of reflecting - both in the sense of mirroring and in the sense of deliberating on (Pennington, 1991) one‟s own thoughts. The written product, opposite to the product approach, is not seen as an end itself. Rather, it is the manifestation of a more effective writer in the making. The student is seen both as a learner and as a writer, and the purpose of writing is clear: a written communication with the writer himself/ herself, with his/her fellow learners, with his/her teacher, and with his/her intended readers (Stewart, 1988). The rise of the process approach marks the beginning of a new era for L2 writing pedagogy. It renders a new perspective in giving response to students written work and a new way of providing feedback. Since the emphasis of writing is now on the whole discourse, the stress of language is on function rather than on form, on the use of a language rather than on its usage (Stewart, 1988), where usage is defined as a body of conventions governing the use of a language. Teachers no longer act primarily or only as the authority on writing, but rather as consultants and assistants to help students to take over the responsibility as writers. The traditional feedback which concentrates on the surface-level mechanics is inadequate in this new orientation. Instead, the teacher must attend to the various processes involved in the act of composing, in order to help students produce coherent, meaningful
  • 4. and creative discourse. In the process approach, the teacher‟s role has shifted from an evaluator of the written product to a facilitator and co-participant in the writing process. The emergence of a process-oriented approach argues for a completely different feedback system. Unlike the product-centred paradigm which regards composing as a product to be evaluated, the process-oriented approach considers writing as a complex developmental task. It pays more attention to how a discourse is created through the negotiation and discovery of meaning than to the production of error-free sentences. Language is a means to explore the writer‟s ideas. The focus in the process approach is on how to give “reader-based” feedback (Elbow, 1981), and the editing of grammatical accuracy is postponed to the final stage. By offering feedback on both content and form, the process approach is more embracing, in that it helps students from the beginning stage of generating ideas to the final stage of refining the whole written discourse. The work of providing feedback to students will also become more demanding. The teacher has two roles to play. Teachers 48 Page 3 may, on the one hand, present themselves as helpful facilitators offering support and guidance; on the other hand, they may act as an authority imposing critical judgement on writing products. The patterns of feedback and responses given by the writing teacher depend very much on the teacher‟s conception of the composing process and his/her understanding of learner‟s errors. Product-oriented feedback is mainly form-focused, emphasizing grammatical correctness while neglecting other aspects such as the discovery and construction of meaning in the writing process. Obviously, there is a need to address concerns of accuracy and langauge in the feedback stage of writing. Thus, the product approach can usefully be incorporated into the system of the process approach. In this paper, I first consider what feedback is and how an effective feedback system works in relation
  • 5. to the writing process. This first consideration is followed by a discussion of the overall usefulness of conventional teacher feedback in the form of error-spotting and correction in enhancing student‟s writing proficiency. The paper also looks at the negative psychological effects caused by traditional practice. Next, the paper explores the concept of feedback as a way of revising old ideas and generating new ones, forming an integral part of the writing process. The paper also discusses why a more humanistic and learner-friendly feedback system is needed. In this connection, some interactive and reader-based techniques are introduced. I conclude the paper by a discussion of the practice and problems of process writing in Hong Kong, calling for a comprehensive theory integrating a focus on product into the prgcess approach. Reconsideration of Error Treatment Many people now understand writing to be a developmental task which can be conceived as a performance made up of a series of lesser skills, one built upon another (Garrison, 1981). The chief activity in writing is learning to write. By writing, the learner is engaged in a complex process which demands the knowledge of content to be written about, the procedural knowledge that enables the manipulation of content (e.g. knowledge of syntactic form) and the procedural knowledge that enables the production of apiece of writing of a particular type (Hillocks, 1987). It is recognized that in skill acquisition, there is an important place for feedback. Feedback can be regarded as a means of providing information and as a reinforcer for revision. It consists of comments and information about performance that someone has demonstrated. The role of feedback as input in the learning process is thus crucial to skill acquisition. Understanding the importance of providing feedback does not necessarily enable teachers to provide appropriate feedback. Teachers have to find the right way of providing feedback for learners. Johnson (1988) introduces two different situations in which a learner may get things wrong. The first one is that the learner simply does not have the appropriate knowledge, and so the
  • 6. knowledge or skill the learner possesses is faulty or incomplete. This is what Corder (1981) calls an error. The second situation is that a learner lacks processing ability. The problem here does not concern whether the learner‟s knowledge is faulty or not; the learner has difficulty executing the knowledge he has acquired in operating conditions. The learner could correct his/her wrong-doing after careful re-examination, however. The result is what Corder (1981) calls a mistake. 49 Page 4 The two distinctions address two issues relevant to feedback practices in writing pedagogy. Bialystok (1982) argues that the first distinction concerns the learner‟s knowledge of the formal properties of the target linguistic codes, while the second highlight the ability to make use of the formal properties to express meaning and content. Obviously, during writing, a student needs these two kinds of knowledge or feedback to perfect the writing skill: (1) feedback towards a better mastery of the formal properties of the target language and (2) feedback to develop procedural knowledge for creating and expressing ideas. The former is a „mechanical‟ issue and may appear in the form of error correcting, while the latter may be qualitative and presented as advice or questions to guide the student to refine ideas and negotiate meaning in the process of composing. In addition to distinguishing the „mechanical‟ and „qualitative‟ issues, four additional considerations must be taken into account if the feedback system is to function adequately. Johnson (1988) clarifies these four elements: a. a desire or need of the learner to correct the wrong behaviour; an internal representation of what the correct behaviour looks like (i.e. the learner‟s own understanding about the correct behaviour); C. the realization of an occurrence of a wrong behaviour; and d. an opportunity to re-practise the skill as reinforcement. The first element indicates that, in providing feedback, the teacher has to think of a better way to arouse and motivate learners to attend toerrors themselves rather than rely on the spotting of errors
  • 7. by an „outsider‟. Johnson (1988) goes on to claim that a teacher‟s initial guidance should aim to help the learner from an internal representation of what the correct behaviour is. The imposition of rules and standards by an authority may work against the making of an internal representation, the learner needs to be made aware of having executed a wrong behaviour so that proper treatment to eradict the wrong behaviour can be carried out. However, the best way to provide feedback and guidance, according to point (d) above, is not an explanation but an actual retrial of the expected behaviour based on the feedback provided by the teacher. One of the advantages of such re-practice is that “the most useful feedback comes from those areas of mismatch which students are themselves able to identify” and “learn what they will from the comparison” (Johnson, 1988). The importance of this feedback system is the emphasis on the use of teacher feedback in providing input for further re-trial by the learner. Moreover, Annet (1969) reminds us that how soon re-trial takes place after corrective action is more crucial than how soon the corrective action takes place after the occurence of a mistake, if the learner is to take full advantage of it. The implication is clear: the need for a feedback session after performance as well as one before re-trial. The implications of Johnson‟s model for providing feedback in process writing can be summarized as follows: a. C. feedback is crucial and necessary to the acquisition and perfection of writing skills; feedback should include information on both content and form; an awareness of error in the part of the learner is essential; yet the arousal of the learners to attend to the error him/herself is even more important, and hence, Page 5 d. the external standard or imposition of criteria from an authority in correcting is not as effective as providing information for learners to correct their own errors; and e. correction of wrong behaviour works best when it is done as re-trial in the real operating conditions.
  • 8. That is, the teacher should not aim at correction of incorrect sentences but a redrafting of the previous work. These considerations turn our attention to the inadequacey of the „school‟ tradition. The traditional approach neglects the complex nature and the non-sequential process of writing, and so the approach cannot provide input to students in different stages of the writing process. Very often, the teacher does not give a second chance for students to revise their work. Moreover, we should be cautious about the underlying principles of the product approach. First, the “accuracy-based” concept of writing wrongly views the production of a piece of writing as a way of reinforcing and consolidating language skills. Student writing is not meant to be perfect. It is a learning-to-write practice; the sole purpose of writing is not for marking, grading or testing (Raimes, 1983). Teachers need to ask themselves why must there always be a certain external standard imposed upon our students without regarding our students as individual writers learning to become competent? It is surprising in the traditional paradigm to find that a teacher‟s job in responding to student writing is primarily the identifying and penalizing of errors. By responding only to grammatical errors, teachers misconceive that writing ability is just an act of becoming more proficient in the lingusitic code of the target language, without thinking that feedback on content and meaning is also essential to student writers. a Even worse, the teacher who works from a product approach often ends the feedback session abruptly without providing the feedback to help the student to revise his/her work. This kind of feedback session is more like a marking session. Hyland (1990) describes the problems that “careful marking should benefit students, [yet] it often seems that it is feedback itself, rather than students acting on feedback, which terminates the exercise.” On the other hand, the traditional way of marking and correcting student writing makes the learners feel annoyed or even makes them dislike
  • 9. writing. Ultimately, the teacher cannot help the learners become competent writers. Thus, the role of the teacher is trivialized. The assistance and feedback given by the teacher should not be confined to the last stage of the writing process. The marking of products should always open more opportunities in which students can redraft their work. By depriving them of their opportunity for redrafting and reassessing, the students cannot have the chance of correcting the wrong behaviour and re-practising the correct behaviour. It is therefore no wonder that some authors question the overall usefulness of teacher feedback (Fathman and Whalley, 1990). Research evidence confirms that conventional teacher feedback does not have a significant effect in enhancing student‟s writing proficiency. Stiff (1967) claims that both terminal and marginal correction do not significantly relate to writing quality. Hendrickson (1978) finds that providing correct form on student writing has no statistically significant effect on students‟ writing proficiency. In another study, Hendrickson (1981) shows that the relation of both directive and selective corrections to the reduction of error is insignificant. Similarly, no conclusive results in terms of writing improvement are found for either long or short written comments made by teachers (Hillocks, 1982). Graham (1983) reports that students who received feedback on every assignment did not make fewer errors than those students who received feedback on every three assignments. 51 Page 6 That is to say, more frequent feedback does not ensure more improvement in writing. Robb et al. (1988) further confirms that “the more direct methods of feedback do not tend to produce results commensurate with the amount of effort required of the instructor to draw the student‟s attention to surface errors”. Finally, Greenbaum and Taylor (1982) report that over 30% of students‟ errors were categorized incorrectly by their teachers when correcting students‟ work. Moreover, correction of errors by teachers could be disheartening to the students and could
  • 10. reinforce their tendency to focus only on sentence-level problems, neglecting the discourse as a whole (Chenoweth, 1987). This could lead to an obsession with the final product, which is a serious writing block hindering the awareness of discovering what one wants to say (Halsted, 1975). Once the learner is obsessed with grammatical correctness, he/she can hardly concentrate on generating ideas and conveying them properly in his/her written discourse. Writing teachers should not be surprised to find that ESL writers can only assimilate a small amount of corrective feedback from a teacher into their own current grammatical system (Ross, 1982). In addition, Corder (1981) and Brumfit (1980) hypothesize that students will retain feedback if they are forced to approach correction as a problem solving activity. Moreover, Anson (1989) warns us that if stuents‟ errors are often corrected by an external agent, students will never venture to write without the approval of the agent and so they can hardly reach the target of becoming proficient writers. To conclude, the failure and the negative psychological effects caused by the traditional product approach are largely caused by a misunderstanding of the nature of composing and the misapplication of some traditional educational orientations (such as behaviouristic views of learning) by writing teachers. In addition, not many teachers have knowledge of how an effective feedback system works. This is understandable considering that a new era of research on theroy and practice of writing pedagogy began only 30 years ago (North, 1987) and that the process approach is still not widely practised in writing classrooms. Moreover, the process approach does not really exclude the correction of errors: Editing and revision are processes vital to the process approach. The process approach in no way excludes editing and revision, but rather calls for a different management of the correction of errors and of the provision of feedback. It is to the discussion of this management function that we now turn to. Feedback as Revising and Rewriting In order for the student to learn from the writing process, a more interactive and student-centred
  • 11. approach in giving feedback to students is required. One guiding principle proposed by Kehl (l970) suggests that teachers communicate “in a distinctly human voice, with sincere respect for the writer as a person and sincere interest in his improvement”. To put this orientation into practice, writing teachers need to help students to build a sense of awareness in themselves as writers, a sense of confidence and self-worth, to counteract the negative influcence of the traditional approach. Praise and positive reinforcement could be incorporated into our teaching strategies to promote a better teacher-student relationship. (Daiker, 1989). This means the teaching of writing could be more humanistic. Diederich (1963) says the use of prasing whatever a student does well improve writing more than any kind or amount of correction of what he does badly, and that it is especially important for the less able writers who need all the encouragement they can get. In other words, the teacher should start from “where the student is, not where the teacher wishes the student was” (Murray, 1982). 52 Page 7 In the process orientation, teachers are not authorities but facilitators; they are not judges or mere proofreaders but genuinely interested readers of original texts created by students (Zamel, 1985). It will also be necessary in the process approach for students to learn to be their own critic reader capable of revising their own prose without relying too much extensive input from the outsider. The change of. writing from „writer-based prose‟ to „reader-based prose‟ is not easy for learners. Writers need to pay attention to writing as communication of meaning and treat writing as goal-oriented activity. The teacher is perhaps the best audience (Lacy, 1989) of the students and should work as reader-and-editor. Students need to discuss, to expand and to „re-see‟ what has been written down with the teacher. The teacher‟s role is active throughout the writing process. Teachers have to cater to a wide range of activities to explore learner‟s strategies for better discourse and redrafting
  • 12. (Brumfit, 1979). This student-centred process-focused approach tries to accommodate individual differences among students while enabling every learner to become actively involved in the process of producing meaningful as well as „correctly‟ written discourse. Before re-defining the concept of feedback for process writing, let us review the four basic assumptions about giving information towards revision: a. b. C. d. FEEDBACK IS RECURRENT Feedback and responses must be incorporated within the writing process as recursive and cycling events. FEEDBACK IS INPUT FOR REVISION Feedback and responses shall always be given as a kind of input for further revision and redrafting. FEEDBACK IS NOT GRADING Feedback and responses to a writer‟s efforts should not be postponed until the last stage of the writing process. Providing feedback must be distinguished from grading or marking. FEEDBACK IS GIVEN AS APPROPRIATE Different kinds of feedback and responses (e.g. content-focused and form- focused) must be given to the writer at different points in the writing process as appropriate. Taking all this into consideration, the concept of feedback can be reformulated as follows: Feedback is an inseparable and recursive component of both the teacher‟s instruction and the writing process. It contributes input throughout the writingprocess as a means of tapping the unexplored resources from the writer. It represents a sense of audience and purpose informing the on-going writingprocess, while establishing a concept of collaborative reader-editor relationship between teacher and student. The feedback from the reader-editor appears as input for further reexamination and revision of the prior written work by providing optimum op-portunities to develop and refine ideas, and may take various forms such as conference and interview. It also helps the writer to achieve and acquire a sense of confidence, a sense of voice and a sense of power in language while gaining access to competent writers or to other writers, whose experience and competence may be similar to or different from that of the author. Feedback Techniques
  • 13. If revision is central to the process of writing, and considering that pre-writing, writing and rewriting are likely to be going on simultaneously (Smith, 1982), more attention needs to be paid to exploring 53 Page 8 effective techniques of teacher-responses. In what follows, five feedback methods are introduced. They are not meant to be definitive - further development and refinement are needed - but they have been tried out by practising teachers or researchers. These techniques reflect the rationale of the feedback model described in this paper and have been proved to work profitably with process writing. (A) Student Self-Monitoring Technique The basic assumption of the student self-monitoring technique is that teacher and student should meet on a one-to-one basis as editor and writer to discuss the draft text. This one-to-one conference is the best situation for providing feedback since both parties can work together to solve the problems that arise. Unfortunately, the teacher may find it difficult to afford or arrange the time for an individual conference. To alleviate the difficulty, Charles (1990) suggests that students can anotate their drafts with comments and questions for the teacher‟s responses. The teacher responds, in return, by writing to these notes with direct and appropriate feedback. This technique not only facilitates the teacher‟s understanding of the writer‟s problems, but also allows students to play a more active role in gaining access to teacher feedback. Charles (1990) describes her techniques as a 4-phase activity: Step 1: Step 2: Step 3: Step 4: Students draft and „monitor‟ their texts Students write the first draft, underline and anotate the problem areas for teacher response. a Teacher/editor responds in writing to the monitored comments Teacher responds to the first draft and replies the written queries. He also adds further comments
  • 14. and returns the paper. Students respond to editorial comments and rewrite their drafts Students produce a second draft and add further explanations or questions to the teacher‟s comments. First and second drafts are then handed in. Teacher/editor responds to student comment and second drafts The teacher again notes down on the first draft any further explanations that are necessary. Teacher responds to the second draft checking whether the student is able to deal with the problems identified during the self-monitoring phase. Further revisions can go on depending on the students, the nature of paper and the time available. If not, the second draft may be the final revision. The merits of the student-centred self-monitoring technique is that it encourages students to look critically and analytically at their writing. Moreover, the teacher can give tailor-made feedback to individual students. (B) Providing Interactive Feedback Marking can be a tedious classroom chore. Teacher correction seldom brings improvement in subsequent writing since teacher correction is often regarded - by both teacher and student - as an ending of the writing process. By reducing the negative effects of marking errors without reducing the benefits of the teacher‟s diligent efforts, Hyland (1990) Suggests „minimal marking‟ and taped commentary to make feedback more productive and interactive. The means to „minimal marking‟ is by using correction codes. This leaves a space for active correction by the student rather than 54 Page 9 reading the disheartening correction of the teacher written in red. By decoding the correction symbols, students have the opportunity to identify the mistakes and correct them for reassessment by the teacher. If teacher needs to give more detail (which is always the case) and sophisticated comments in areas other than mechanical errors, the technique of recorded commentary is useful. Instead of writing tedious comments, the teacher can just read through the paper and talk about the weaknesses and
  • 15. merits, recording them on a tape recorder. Hyland (1990) claims that this method is more effective since the writer “can see how someone actually responds to [his/her] writing as it develops”. However, Hyland reminds us that it is not possible to include all the mistakes in terms of „codes‟, and too many codes could be confusing. Also, codes do not represent all kinds of feedback (other than on mistakes). (C) Peer Feedback Peer feedback may be referred to by many terms such as peer evaluation, peer critiquing, peer editing or peer response (Keh, 1989). Yet all of these names refer to the same kind of activity: Students read their peers‟ papers and make responses to them as a reader. This gives writing an authentic purpose rather than being only an assignment to be graded, and, in turn, develop a sense of a divergent audience, thereby motivating students to communicate better „stories‟ (Urzua, 1987). Students presumably react more willingly and actively to the questions and feedback made by their trusted friends. They can all feel the joy of sharing their comments and their writing within the group (Lacy, 1989). At the same time, they become a better critic of themselves, for they become more aware of their own writing as they are reading another‟s writing. Students therefore learn more and become more confident as well. However, Urzua (1987) reminds us of how crucial is the question of training learners to cope with the task. Students may not be able to ask constructive questions for redrafting. Surely, students must be trained or guided to perform the task - for example, to be critical of the development of ideas and organization in written discourse. (D) Conferencing Carnicelli (1980) makes it clear that although conferencing can take various forms, all conferencing has one common feature: It is a conversation between 2 parties, that is, between a teacher and a student. It is the conversation that yields the merits and strengths of the conference method. Conferencing is designed to help students find their own way in writing. Carnicelli lists six major teacher activities when a conference method is adopted: 1. the teacher should read the paper carefully; 2. the teacher should offer encouragement;
  • 16. 3. the teacher should ask the right questions; 4. the teacher should evaluate the paper; 5. the teacher should make specific suggestions for revising the paper; 6. the teacher must listen to the student. He also summarizes five major advantages of the conference method: 1. Individualized instruction in writing is more effective than group instruction. Page 10 2. The teacher can make a more effective response to the paper in an oral conference than in written comments. 3. The student can learn more from an oral response than from written comments. 4. Conferences can promote self-learning. 5. The conference method is the most efficient use of the teacher‟s time. (E) Correcting Spaghetti Writing The teacher may often find that many students can communicate ideas and meaning, but they often write loose-jointed sentenceswithout meetingthe standards of grarnrnatical accuracy and coherence. This kind of writing in terms of incoherent sentences is referred to as spaghetti writing by McDevitt (1989). To help students learn to be responsible for their own mistakes, students need to be trained to solve the problem of sentence-level incoherence. First of all, students must be taught what a sentence is. Basically, the process of correcting spaghetti writing can be dividied into 2 phases: I. Pre-writing Exercise (i) Recognition of „basic sentence‟ The teacher gives some complex sentences to students and asks them to divide each sentence into meaningful word groups. Students are then asked to underline the basic sentence which can stand as a complete and meaningful statement. (ii) Expansion exercise The teacher asks students to expand a number of basic sentences by responding to specific guided WI-I-questions. The teacher may also highlight a particular word to be expanded. For example: T: The policeman stopped the car. (When? Why?) S: The policeman, thinking that the driver was drunk, stopped the car at once. (iii) Linking devices This is an exercise to reinforce students‟ skill in manipulating conjunctions. Students fill in the blanks in short texts, such as: although . . . . . . . . . Smoking is dangerous for your health so . . . . . . . . . . because . . . . . . . . . . II. Post-writing Analysis
  • 17. First, the teacher presents a completed paragraph of ungrammatical English to see whether student can locate and correct errors. If necessary, the teacher can underline the mistakes for students. Then students are asked to examine each of the previously marked sentences and divide them into meaningful word groups. If students find any sentence with no basic sentence or with too many basic sentences, students have to rewrite paragraph, keeping the original ideas of the writer. This exercise is not easy to conduct, and some of the grammatical points are not easy to explain to students (Kharma, 1986). However, the activity “enables student writers to review their writing in a more critical and systematic manner” (McDevitt, 1989). By using the technique of correcting spaghetti writing, the teacher can help students to become better editor-reader of their own writing and at the same time setting themselves free from concentrating on correcting mechanical errors. The insights of McDevitt could perhaps be extended to the development of techniques for working on high-level, i.e. discourse-level, intersentential coherence. 56 Page 11 Implications for The Teaching of Writing in Hong Kong Most instruction in teaching writing in Hong Kong follows the traditional model described by Applebee (1981), consisting of exercises and drills with little opportunity for students to explore the act of expressing their thoughts. The orientation towards grammatical correctness is not difficult to understand since many teachers believe that the most serious problems of ESL writers is their incorrect English usage. These Hong Kong teachers think that L2 learners need more practice in sentence-level skills and that organization and other strategies ofwriting can be taught later (English Bulletin Editors, 1962). However, sentence-level mechanics and strategies for discourse-level coherence cannot be separated. Both of them are essential elements for composing and must be learnt and taught at the same time in the writing lessons. If the strategies for discourse-level coherence are not taught in school, the chance of students acquiring these skills in the future is rare and will probably be postponed indefinitely.
  • 18. The problem is that many Hong Kong teachers still stick to the principles of audio-lingual approach that (1) writing should be the last of the four skills to be acquired (Ortmeyer, 1981) and (2) that teachers should prevent occurrence of written errors at all cost. Though the latest ESL writing principles advocated by the Hong Kong Education Department is based on the communicative approach (Hong Kong Curriculum Development Committee, 1983), it is likely that local teachers still react to a text as discrete items presented in linear sequence. They still approach students‟ texts as final products to be evaluated upon some preconceive notions about good writing. They believe that the teaching of form should precedegontent (Li, 1990). One of the reasons is that many Hong Kong teachers do not receive training in process writing. Moreover, Hong Kong teachers have to teach grammar rules and English usage to meet the requirement of the Hong Kong Certificate of Examination (Mohan and Lo, 1985). Writing, then, is likely to be misconceived by both the teachers and students as a means to practise and consolidate grammar rules and usage. Hence, in reality, the teaching of writing is reduced to a set of prescriptive procedures which need to be strictly adhered. On the other hand, many ESL teachers do not think that the process approach is applicable for students (Ammon, 1985). This is particularly true in Hong Kong since teachers are not familiar with the techniques involved in process writing. Mohan and Lo (1985) also claim that the process- oriented approach is difficult to implement in terms of students‟ familiarity with the methods used, the large class size, and the pressure from standardized examinations. In addition, it is quite difficult for many teachers to give up the controlling and „grammarian‟ role in the classroom. Even if they are willing to practise process writing, they may find themselves lacking the proper training and school resources for implementing that practice. To change the situation, teachers must start to reconsider their role in the language classroom. They need to consider the value of being no longer judges but facilitators in the language classroom. Thus,
  • 19. in responding to student writing, they should not be too obsessed about students‟ grammatical accuracy, ignoring their responsibility of taking care of various aspects of the students‟ writing process. Teachers also have to accept individual differences among students. In this respect, more time needs to be spent on giving reader-editor feedback to student writing rather than on correcting surface-level errors. Generally speaking, teachers have to pay more attention to the writing process - to how they can help students generate ideas, negotiate meaning and revise their drafts etc. 57 Page 12 Obviously, more communication and interaction between teacher and students during the writing process is essential. Apart from the change in classroom procedures and practices, innovations have to be introduced in the training of ESL teachers. First, ESLw-riting teachers must be given the opportunity to learnwhat process writing is and to be trained or re-trained in process writing skills. That is to say local institutes such as the Institute of Language in Education, the Colleges of Education and the Schools of Education at Hong Kong University and Chinese University have to provide ESLwriting courses for both practising and pre-service teachers. At the same time, the HK ESL writing syllabus has to he revised so as to accommodate the new practices. In addition, new textbooks have to be written to meet the needs of process writing in schools. Students also need guidance in how to play an active role in the language classroom. Moreover, the school authority should change some of their traditional practices concerning the teaching of writing, such as asking the students to write a certain number of compositions for each academic year, without paying any attention to enhancing the standard of grammatical correctness and the content of student writing. Instead, the aim of teaching writing should focus on how to help students acquire the skills of writing. To achieve these objectives, more guidance and resources must be offered to
  • 20. ESL writing teachers and more support have to be given for carrying out Hong Kong-based research on teaching process writing in order to develop better practices for the local situation. Conclusion The act of writing is never easy to define. Arndt (1987) says that writing can have two different meanings depending on how we use the term. What do we really want to talk about when we say we are writing‟? Are we referring to the product of composition - text; or are we referring to the act of composing itself? This question gives rise to the two major paradigms of writing pedagogy: the product-focused approach and the process-oriented approach. The former approach focuses on the end product of the writing process, with its major emphasis of surface-level mechancis. The latter concentrates on how a product is produced, with its major concern on content and discourse as a whole. The product approach is often criticised for the fact that it does not take into account the psychological and cognitive processes intrinsic to writing. The opponents of the product-approach claim that process-writing seems to be the best way to teach writing (Wason, 1981). What both parties to the debate have neglected is the fact that the two approaches represent two different perspectives for looking at writing. There is simply no one best way to understand and to teach so complex a skill as writing. We can only say that the process approach enables people “to see writing in a new way and thereby ask questions that were not asked as long as people saw writing simply as finished product” (Liebman-Kleine, 1986), while the product approach reminds us that grammar and syntax are also important features of writing which cannot be eliminated for writing proficiency. We should not treat the two approaches as two polarising dogmas of two extreme beliefs. They are, in fact, two sides of the same coin. Moreover, the two paradigms cannot be divorced from each other since composing is a language problem as well as a rhetorical problem. Only by combining the two approaches can the aim of 58
  • 21. Page 13 teachingwriting be achieved: to “free [our students] from the pressure of having to produce accurate, standard English at the same time as they are generating and exploring ideas in writing” (Stewart, 1988). There is always a need to integrate the two views into one unified theory in which student writers and teacher-readers can explore meaningful discourse together. We need not see writing as a tool to demonstrate learning any more, but rather as a tool for further learning (Emig, 1977). Thus, the two approaches can acquire new meanings and have new roles „to play. The process approach can be seen as formative feedback for refining writing. In this respect, the teacher‟s focus is on monitoring student progress during instruction. The purpose of formative feedback is to provide continuous feedback to both the students and teacher on learning successes and failures of an on-going activity. Such feedback provides a chance for the teacher to interact with the students and to modify his/her instruction methods or materials to facilitate better learning. This kind of feedback also requires the teacher to gather fairly detailed information on the progress of the student in a period of time and to intervene at any possible moment of the learning process to help the learner. In this process, the teacher is not a distant judge but a mentor to facilitate learning. A better teacher-student relationship can thus be established. In contrast, the product approach needs no longer be regarded as primarily a marking orientation in the classroom. Rather, it can be interpreted as a way of providing summative feedback to students. By providing summative feedback to students, the teacher tries to determine the student‟s status of achievement at the end of an instructional segment with the primary goal of certifying student mastery of the intended learning outcomes, and to determine the extent to which the instructional objectives have been achieved. In this way, the information gathered for summative purpose may be useful in a formative sense since the teacher knows how effective his/her instruction is and how far further reinforcement is needed for his/her students. With such information, the teacher can revise
  • 22. his/her teacher strategies in the subsequent lessons. In this way, summative and formative feedback become necessary and inseparable components of ESL writing instruction and are complementary to one another. Finally, the two kinds of feedback[l], if adopted into the writing classroom, can be genuinely incorporated as a unified pedagogical ESL writing feedback system, embracing the advantages of the two kinds of writing approaches. However, before we can reach that goal, first we need to “examine the [present] classroom authority structure and perhaps even redefine the purpose for the composition class (Onore, 1989). The goal of combining process and product orientation will have profound effects on writing- revision practices in the composition classroom. One of the most important consequences is the collaborative effort between teacher and students in making writing a joint contribution of both parties. In this orientation, both parties will be considered active participants in sharing ideas, making suggestions and doing revision in the process of composing. Student writers are given total freedom in controlling their own prose in making choices and in giving solutions to rhetorical problems. The teacher‟s response to student writing becomes a real communication from a reader and not from an instructor identifying and correcting mistakes. Comments from the teacher are reassurring to the students and the focus of comments are meaning-centred, which urges the students to think of themselves less as students and more as writers (Sommers, 1989). Errors are now treated not as something to be penalized but as a necessary by-product of language use. In this way, Page 14 everything said and written in the comments encourages the student writer to take over the responsibility of writing himself/herself or assists the student to express his/her ideas and meaning in the written discourse. A friendly relationship is established between teacher and students. Thus, the psychology of positive reinforcement can be applied in the writing instruction and become an
  • 23. essential resource for teaching writing. There is no fear of whether the student is able to cope psychologically with the large amount of red markings or negative comments or the fear of an external agent prescribing every detail for the learner in the writing lesson. In this way, a better teacher-pupil relationships will be enhanced and the two parties can gain a deepened appreciation of writing and greater satisfaction with their work. As a result, the teaching of writing can become more humanistic and less authoritarian. Moreover, the unified pedagogical ESL writing should be facilitated and how marking and editing should be implemented. It also gives an answer to the question of „curing‟ grammatical mistakes and the creation of a reader-based written discourse in one thoery. However, many teachers would think that it is not easy to implement such practice in Hong Kong: Would it be too demanding for Hong Kong teachers to realize these goals, knowing that they have a heavy teaching duty and a large number of students to attend to? At first glance, the question seems valid. What really matters, however, is a change of attitude and an obligation to follow the new practice. Such a change of attitude and a sense of commitment can be engendered only by taking away the teacher‟s mask of „authoritarian‟ in the classroom and by reconsidering his/her own role in the composition classroom. In the light of the humanistic orientation, teachers are better regarded themselves as facilitators and should treat their students as learners and writers in their own right and not as subjects to be moulded according to the teacher‟s own disposition. Secondly, with the practice of the new feedback system, much time is saved from correcting grammatical mistakes. The time saved can be used more profitably in writing constructive comments for students. By interacting with the students, a more learner-friendly atmosphere can be created. In this way, the ESL writing classroom becomes a place not for discouraging student writers, but rather a reassurring milieu for nurturing competent and confident learner writers. Thus, both the teaching and the learning of ESL writing skills can be improved, to the benefit of the students as well as teachers.
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