1. Where am I
going?
ESSAY

2. THESIS STATEMENT
 a summarized, short and snappy idea
which provides the reader an exact
point of argument, analysis, opinion or
reason to envisage the paper

3. THESIS STATEMENT
-main idea of your essay

4. THESIS STATEMENT
-one sentence that provides the
controlling idea

5. THESIS STATEMENT
- umbrella that covers all the
main points of your research
paper

6. Characteristics of a
Strong Thesis Statement
1. takes a stand
2. justifies discussion
3. expresses one main idea
4. specific

7. SPECIFIC TOPIC
+ SPECIFIC CLAIM
------------------------
THESIS STATEMENT

8. Specific Topic: The use of
graphic videos in TV news
programs
+ Specific Claim: can have
a negative effect

9. Thesis= The use of graphic videos in TV
news programs can have a negative effect
on young viewers
Thesis= TV news programs that show
graphic videos affect young viewers in a
negative way

10. Fact:
The population of the Philippines is 80
million.
Thesis:
The alarming rate of increase of population
of the Philippines poses a threat to the
food supply of the country.

11. A. Sixty-five percent of Filipino
teenagers are into online gaming.
B. Poor parental guidance may lead
to online game addiction among
teenagers.

12. Choose the thesis statement.
A. Over four thousand call centers have
been established since year 2001.
B. Call Center industry contributes to
the dramatic improvement in the
Philippine Economy.

13. A. The worsening conditions of the
ozone layer causes the extreme
conditions of the weather in the
Philippines.
B. At least ten provinces from the
Visayan region were greatly affected
by drought this year.

14. Let us try to make a thesis statement
from these factual statements.
 The tourism industry of the Philippines has
improved.
 Many students are taking up BS Information
Technology.
 Social Networking sites connects people,
friends, and, families.

15. Seatwork
Choose three from the following factual statements.
Make a thesis statement based on the factual
statement.
1. Social Networking sites helps people be connected to
one another.
2. College students are dropping out of school.
3. Two million college graduates all over the Philippines
are unemployed.
4. The average teenagers spend at least an hour in
social networking sites.
5. The noontime show “Eat Bulaga” has been a part of
the Filipino culture.

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Plata, S. et.al. (2006). Research: Process and Product
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Plata, S. et.al. (2006). Keys to Critical Reading and Writing 1:
English Proficiency and Personal Leadership Workbook for
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Plata, S., Mirador, J.F., Dayag, D. T. , and Chua, H. (2002).
Thinking and Writing Research: A Complete Guide To
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