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1. Group grades

Rafaella              Grade C




 Shahna               Grade C
Showing the time to make the
 audience understand what's
going on with out making the
        play to long.




                               A good close up shot to express her
                                            feelings.
Even better if

• It showed who she                        If the audience knew why she was
  was talking to on the                    crying and why she killed her self.
   phone before she
       picked up
2. group grades


Kayleigh           Grade B
What went well

 Used distribution             Uses close up shots makes the
  logo make the              audience understand what's going
sequence effective.              on also to show feelings.
Even better if

Even better if the sense were shown clearer it jumped to
           one to another mad it confusing

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1.cw analysis

  • 2. 1. Group grades Rafaella Grade C Shahna Grade C
  • 3. Showing the time to make the audience understand what's going on with out making the play to long. A good close up shot to express her feelings.
  • 4. Even better if • It showed who she If the audience knew why she was was talking to on the crying and why she killed her self. phone before she picked up
  • 6. What went well Used distribution Uses close up shots makes the logo make the audience understand what's going sequence effective. on also to show feelings.
  • 7. Even better if Even better if the sense were shown clearer it jumped to one to another mad it confusing