1. 3rd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN”
By Hannah Butters
Time Location Video Audio
N/A Opening production Non-diegetic music
3 titles (on a black box music.
secs background).
The North Old stock style Non-diegetic SFX of a
2 Block footage of long eerie projector rattling
secs corridor, corridors. Credits and crackling. Non-
The Beacon continue to show; they diegetic SFX of a
School are layered on top of faint heartbeat
the visual.
The North A blacked out, ghostly Same sound continues.
2 Block window.
secs corridor,
The Beacon
School
The North The stock footage Same sound continues.
2 Block continues to track
secs corridor, down corridors.
The Beacon Credits continue to be
School displayed
3 The North As it turns a corner, Same sound continues.
secs Block a door comes into
corridor, view. The footage ends
The Beacon with a close up of the
School door knob.
3 N/A The Main Title – THE The projector SFX
secs UNKNOWN (Fades in and stops, but the
out) heartbeat continues.
SFX of a door knob
rattling.
2 Outside GRACE’S eyes. GRACE: Is it on? Are
secs the you recording?
entrance
to The SOPHIE: Oops! Hang
Beacon on! It’s zoomed right
2 School SOPHIE zooms out on into your face. Let
secs the camera so GRACE me just zoom out…
and ERIN are fully in
10 shot. GRACE: Oh cheers
secs Sophie!
SOPHIE: Well, we can
edit that bit out,
don’t worry!
GRACE: Ready?

2. 3rd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN”
By Hannah Butters
SOPHIE: Yep, ok when
you’re ready…
8 GRACE looks directly GRACE: Ok, so the
secs into the camera. ERIN time is 10.18 pm and
stands beside her. we are just about to
break into the school
to spend a night in
the supposedly
haunted east wing!
ERIN shows the camera ERIN: So yeah, we got
her rucksack. the stuff; Torch,
sleeping bag, that
sort of thing!
SOPHIE: So should we
head in?
ERIN and GRACE start GRACE: The gates
6 walking towards the should be just round
secs building, SOPHIE the back here…
follows with the
camera.
The girls reach the ERIN: Ok, so you
back gates. expect us to climb
that?
5 GRACE attempts to lift GRACE: Yeah, come
secs ERIN onto the gate, here and I’ll give
but is clearly you a boost.
struggling.
SOPHIE can you help
please?
SOPHIE: I have a
camera in my hand!
GRACE: Yeah well,
switch it off for the
minute and give me a
hand.
The camera switches
off.

3. 3rd DRAFT “THE UNKNOWN”
By Hannah Butters