MUET STPM

1. MUET EXTENDED
WRITING
Amirul Hakim
Nur Farahin
Amir Akmal
Kanageshwari
Jevinya

2. QUESTION 7 :
“HOLDING A PART-TIME JOB WHILE
STUDYING DISTRUPTS A STUDENT’S
STUDIES”
WHAT IS YOUR VIEW ? YOU SHOULD WRITE
AT LEAST 350 WORDS
In my view, I totally agree with the
statement

3. INTRODUCTION
 It is true that youngsters nowadays are
independent .
 With excuse to gain experience , improve their
potential and money to fulfil their desires , they
go for a part-time job while studying .
 Some people manage to handle both studies
and work but most people are not capable to
do it .
 This is why , I strongly believe that holding a
part-time job while studying disrupts a
student’s studies .

4. YES , A PART-TIME JOB CAN BE DISTRUPTING
BECAUSE OF,
Stress
Lost focus
Less time to study

5. FORMAT
Key point
Main reason 1 (WHY)
Main reason 2 (HOW)
Examples
Strong statement

6. STRESS
 First and foremost – part time job can disrupts a
student’s studies due to stress .
 Going to school or class by day and having a part-
time job by night can stress out people especially a
student .
 Mixing problems at school and working place can
cause students to stress
 For example :
At school – the teachers are pushing on homework
, presentations and exams .
At working place – the managers or boss are
burdening with hardwork , get scolded and tight
with regulations
o Students who rarely know how to handle their
stress can disrupt their studies’ spirit by the
lack of energy .

7. LOST FOCUS
 Besides that, a part-time job is disturbing
because it makes students lose their focus in
studies .
 Having a part-time job can cause student to
forget the importance of focusing in studies
 Where can they focus on one thing at a time if
they had to focus two things at a time .
 Take for example , during examination weeks ,
they are still satisfied with at least excel in
exam by instead of they can do better and excel
well in exam without having a part-time job .
 Most students are blinded by money that cause
their focus have turn to their job .

8. LESS TIME TO STUDY
 In addition , a part-time job can also disrupts one’s
studies as they have less time to study .
 Students do not have extra or even enough
time to study and make revision on their own
for schools or exams.
 Too packed schedules and receiving many
tasks at working place and school happens all the
time for being a worker and student at the same
time
 For example , when one’s schedule is too pack they
are tired and when they are tired they choose to
rest more than doing brainy activities.
 So , I can conclude that most students are lack of
time management skills .

9. IN CONCLUSION ,
 I strongly agree with the statement that
holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a
student’s studies .
 Every student has the right to make their
decision on having a part-time job .
 However , they also have to consider on a few
things about if they are really responsible people
and have the capabilities to manage it well by
mentally and physically ready .
 Only by that , students are allowed to have a
part-time job but still are not recommended .