1. Viet Pham
Christ the King: Aquinas
13L4022
Contrasting my draft and
final product

2.  This image on the left is my draft of my front cover. The image is not
completed but shows that it needs improvement in more than one way.
 For example, I plan to add more cover lines as the image looks slightly
empty in terms of the amount of cover lines which would have the
effect of attracting more consumers if there were more coverlines
 In addition, I also plan to write something at the top to attract the
reader by using indie singers to attract them as well as having a circle of
some sorts which may have a competition for the readers to be involved
in.
 I also intend to put the artist on my double page
spread in this cover to link the front cover to the
double page spread by having their name linked
to the coverlines.
 Furthermore, I may add the selling line at the
top which has the function to also attract the
audience by having something interesting that
the reader may find.
 I am not a hundred per cent sure about the
colour scheme and so it may change if I feel it is
necessary.

3.  This image to the left is my draft of the contents page. This
image is also not complete as I still need to add a couple of
more things to the contents such as the logo for my magazine to
tell the reader what magazine they are reading and it is also
conventional for my logo to be somewhere in the corner of the
contents page.
 In terms of colour scheme I have decided to make my contents
page and the double page spread have a similar coloured
background as it is conventional.
 I also would like to include a editor’s note which
some but not all magazines have as it lets the reader
know the thoughts and feelings of one of the people
who helped create the magazine.
 Also, I would also change the font the title as it
seems inappropriate compared to my front cover
and double page spread as the one that I changed it
to seems to have a simple yet clear effect because it
is simple to read.

4.  This image is my draft for my double page spread. The
main things I feel I need to add to this image is that I need
to differentiate between the questions and the response.
 One way of doing this is by having the questions in a
colour such as red whilst I should have the response
remain black.
 Also I intend to have the first letter in this article bigger
than the other letters as it is conventional to do so.
 Speaking of conventions, I am also planning to
add my magazine logo onto the corner of the
double page.
 I may change the colour of the title as I feel it
looks bland and will probably change it to a
colour I feel is more suitable, attractive and
appropriate for the double page spread.
 In addition, I would add some kind of speech so
the consumer gets a little understanding as to
what the double page spread is about.